Make You Laugh -Part 4

God, why do you like to be in control?
Why do we keep making mistakes and you keep correcting them?
Aren’t you ever tired?
Do we ask you too much?
Have you ever put anything off?
Do you always know what to do? 
Is everything easy for you?
Why are you not a respecter of persons?
Okay, God, I have asked You way too much
It is time for me to talk to you normally
God, what did you do yesterday?
Can’t do that 
Here I am asking you again
Okay where have you been lately? 
What places have you been to?
What – I can’t say anything without asking You
What is the deal? 
God, do you like staying here with us? 
And help us?
God, You are the greatest Father anyone can have
And you would do anything for us
Love you so much God
Glad you never leave
Thank you Father
Love you, your daughter Toquyen
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Harrell Avatar
May 24, 2012 at 12:03 PM
Lol. Send it my way and God will pay it. Lol. He sure will. Love, Toquyen
Andresen Avatar
May 24, 2012 at 11:24 AM
Toquyen, I think you will get a HUGE phone bill from "The sky Bank" - ......lol......Amen! - Very well written!!!!!!!
A   Avatar
May 23, 2012 at 9:54 PM
T.H., lots of thoughts, ... thank you for sharing... good night..pd
Harrell Avatar
May 24, 2012 at 5:52 AM
Thank you PD. Have a good morning now :) Toquyen
Grisetti Avatar
May 23, 2012 at 7:52 PM
I enjoyed reading your poem tonight, thank you for sharing.
Harrell Avatar
May 23, 2012 at 7:54 PM
Thank you Joann :) Glad you like it. Toquyen
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