Brenda Chiri Poet Rhyme

Make This Guarantee

Spread me with 
words spoken
Tease me with 
simple desire
Share with me a
special token
Let's build our 
own empire

Let's take our time 
to see enternity 
Life's so short, days
can be so few
I know you got it 
bad for me
Like you know I do
For you

Hold my hand let's
walk along
sandy beaches 
at sunset
Sing me your
favorite song
Enjoy the half
Moons silhouette 

Let's watch the beauty
life has to offer 
When there is just
you and me
All the good we two 
can foster
Let's make this 
guarantee

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Curtis Moorman October 22, 2019 at 12:08 PM That special "him" you referred may be closer than you realize. You have a way about you, poetically, that lends itself to creating a desire to "join you" in your world! Great poem from an excellent poetess! Brenda Chiri October 22, 2019 at 12:10 PM Ahh Curtis thank you so much for your kind words!;) you are too kind!;)

John Fleming October 22, 2019 at 10:12 AM You really do have a talent for reeling off the rhyming lines, Brenda...love the way it just skips along. Lots of warm thoughts. :) john Brenda Chiri October 22, 2019 at 10:16 AM Thank you John! Wish those warm wishes and thoughts could keep me warm lol it's so cold here! All my affection!;)

Gershon Wolf October 20, 2019 at 11:44 AM So romantically penned, Brenda. Sigh... ~ In a trance in Chicago Brenda Chiri October 20, 2019 at 1:26 PM Ahhh Gershon as long as I left you sighing!;) I love it!;) thank you!;)

Regina Mcintosh October 18, 2019 at 7:55 PM So beautiful and romantic. Lovely words. Prayers and love, Gina Brenda Chiri October 20, 2019 at 1:25 PM Thank you Regina! Your are too kind!;)

Gordon Mcconnell October 18, 2019 at 3:34 PM A lovely romantic piece Brenda, showing great rhyme and flow with great expression of thought too. So glad to see you still here, you are such a blessing! Have a lovely weekend, Gordon Brenda Chiri October 18, 2019 at 4:59 PM Thank you Gordon you are so sweet! I really appreciate your friendship!;)

Chris Green October 18, 2019 at 3:23 PM Here's hoping it is a lifetime guarantee. Nicely done. Brenda Chiri October 18, 2019 at 4:59 PM Thank you Chris! One can only hope!;)

John Hamilton October 18, 2019 at 10:01 AM Very nice Brenda, enjoying the simple things in life with a loved one, guarantees happiness, loved the positive vibes of this write! Brenda Chiri October 18, 2019 at 4:55 PM John thank you so much! Yea I'm trying to stay away from the melancholy type poetry! Lol but one never knows where ones muse will take them!;)

Vladislav Raven October 18, 2019 at 4:39 AM Hi Brenda, this is such a wonderful piece of poetry. Your wonderful, gentle words, they flow so gently into the heart of the reader. Another piece of gold from a golden pen. A fav. Have a wonderful Friday. Hugs....Mike. XX Brenda Chiri October 18, 2019 at 4:54 PM Mike thank you so much! I am so glad you liked this!;)