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Make This Guarantee

Spread me with words spoken Tease me with simple desire Share with me a special token Let's build our own empire Let's take our time to see enternity Life's so short, days can be so few I know you got it bad for me Like you know I do For you Hold my hand let's walk along sandy beaches at sunset Sing me your favorite song Enjoy the half Moons silhouette Let's watch the beauty life has to offer When there is just you and me All the good we two can foster Let's make this guarantee

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Curtis Moorman

Date: 10/22/2019 12:08:00 PM

That special "him" you referred may be closer than you realize. You have a way about you, poetically, that lends itself to creating a desire to "join you" in your world! Great poem from an excellent poetess!

Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/22/2019 12:10:00 PM

Ahh Curtis thank you so much for your kind words!;) you are too kind!;)

John Fleming

Date: 10/22/2019 10:12:00 AM

You really do have a talent for reeling off the rhyming lines, Brenda...love the way it just skips along. Lots of warm thoughts. :) john

Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/22/2019 10:16:00 AM

Thank you John! Wish those warm wishes and thoughts could keep me warm lol it's so cold here! All my affection!;)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/20/2019 11:44:00 AM

So romantically penned, Brenda. Sigh... ~ In a trance in Chicago

Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/20/2019 1:26:00 PM

Ahhh Gershon as long as I left you sighing!;) I love it!;) thank you!;)

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 10/18/2019 7:55:00 PM

So beautiful and romantic. Lovely words. Prayers and love, Gina

Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/20/2019 1:25:00 PM

Thank you Regina! Your are too kind!;)

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 10/18/2019 3:34:00 PM

A lovely romantic piece Brenda, showing great rhyme and flow with great expression of thought too. So glad to see you still here, you are such a blessing! Have a lovely weekend, Gordon

Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/18/2019 4:59:00 PM

Thank you Gordon you are so sweet! I really appreciate your friendship!;)

Chris Green

Date: 10/18/2019 3:23:00 PM

Here's hoping it is a lifetime guarantee. Nicely done.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/18/2019 4:59:00 PM

Thank you Chris! One can only hope!;)

John Hamilton

Date: 10/18/2019 10:01:00 AM

Very nice Brenda, enjoying the simple things in life with a loved one, guarantees happiness, loved the positive vibes of this write!

Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/18/2019 4:55:00 PM

John thank you so much! Yea I'm trying to stay away from the melancholy type poetry! Lol but one never knows where ones muse will take them!;)

Vladislav Raven

Date: 10/18/2019 4:39:00 AM

Hi Brenda, this is such a wonderful piece of poetry. Your wonderful, gentle words, they flow so gently into the heart of the reader. Another piece of gold from a golden pen. A fav. Have a wonderful Friday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/18/2019 4:54:00 PM

Mike thank you so much! I am so glad you liked this!;)