Make Me Whole - a Collaboration With Edward Ibeh

Collaboration with Edward Ibeh

Oh, precious one, I need you…
Be the missing ying to my yang.
Come on home to a safe haven
In this warm, cozy heart of mine
Stay forever more, I implore thee, because…
Without you, there’s a hollow there!
And I’ll journey through
This vale of tears, incomplete.
A kin to sunlight without the sun,
Or a shadow without light,
Or a Romeo without his Juliet,
Or a pearl being formed without an oyster.
On my own, I am but a starless night.
My dearest, say you need me, too.
Let me be the sparkling star that shines
With light to fill your heart.
I will be as the sun that rises
To make the shadows dance.
Together our home, will be our universe
Where pearls are at our fingertips.
Warmth will fill every hollow corner
As tears dry and smiles commence
We’ll be a shining duo
High as the moon leading tides.
These tides of love in strength we’ll share;
Moving endlessly together.
I have reached your cozy heart
Where I stay forevermore!
All this could be, if you complete me.
I beseech you, make me whole.

Heidi Sands and Edward Ibeh

1/25/22

A special thanks to a very talented poet Edward Ibeh for joining me to write this special collaboration. I enjoyed it very much :)

Received POTD 1/26/22
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022


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Date: 1/27/2022 4:29:00 PM
- Heidi and Edward, congratulations on p.o.t.d. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/28/2022 6:59:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise :) hugs
Date: 1/27/2022 8:04:00 AM
Heidi , A beautiful collaboration with Edward . Big congratulations on POTD ! You both weave love together magically. Heartfelt and poignant. Blessings, Susan :)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/27/2022 8:32:00 AM
Thank you very much Susan :)
Date: 1/26/2022 8:34:00 AM
You collaborate well together Heidi, congratulations to you and Edward on POTD. A well deserved honour. Tom
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/26/2022 9:20:00 AM
Thank you very much Tom. I appreciate your kind support :)
Date: 1/26/2022 7:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your collaboration with Edward's POTD! Truly a lovely and romantic piece. :) Paulette
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/26/2022 9:19:00 AM
Thank you Paulette. I appreciate your kind comment. I hope all is well :)
Date: 1/26/2022 7:54:00 AM
Congratulations to both Heidi and Edward on your POTD win. A "Wonderful" collaboration. Have a blessed day.............
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/26/2022 7:59:00 AM
Thank you very much Paula! I hope you have a blessed day too :)
Date: 1/26/2022 7:13:00 AM
I just commented on POTD. A truly deserving romantic write. Much enjoyed the metaphors. Kudos to you and Edward for this collaboration, Heidi.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/26/2022 7:25:00 AM
Thank you so very much Vijay. I was a little late, at getting it onto my page. It came about quickly yesterday. I appreciate your support always and I am grateful for the FAVE ! I hope you have a nice day :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/26/2022 7:20:00 AM
I am saving this in my FAVES.
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