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Make Me Sleep

My craving soul keeps me awake My inner turmoil jolts me when I doze Night after night this toll I take Droopiness rules, tranquility goes The four-walls of my room squeeze me The roof seems aiming to crush my body In darkness dreadful images I see Each wink a disaster, each breath a calamity Spread your silky hairs on my chest Let its soothing caress make me sleep Let my breath your perfume digest Take me to the world of slumber deep Let the bough of your arms be resigned Let the glow of your face in darkness shine Let your body curves be entwined Let your heartbeat mingle with mine For my wounds you are the balm desired You alone can free my soul from anguish Your touch is what desolate heart aspired Without you I’m like an out of water fish. You alone can bring the serenity desired Your captivating cheek on my bosom keep You are the one my longing heart aspired Let your enchanting perfume put me to sleep Sintra Portugal. 11-12-2 Winner in Send Me To Sleep Contest sponsored by Poet- Destroyer -Judged on 10/26/2012

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Date: 10/29/2012 6:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem winning in P.D.'s "Send me to sleep...." contest Mohammad. Love, Carol
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Mohammad Yamin
Date: 10/31/2012 6:59:00 PM
A big thank you for your kind message of congratulations on my win, Carol
Date: 10/28/2012 12:59:00 AM
SUPER CONGRATS MOHAMMAD ON A FINE WIN BY SLEEPY PD LUV ..
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Mohammad Yamin
Date: 10/31/2012 6:57:00 PM
Thanks for your congratulatory message Sweet Heart
Date: 10/27/2012 10:16:00 AM
a romantic one! Congrats on the win!
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Mohammad Yamin
Date: 10/31/2012 6:56:00 PM
Thanks for your appreciation and your congratulatory message
Date: 10/27/2012 3:47:00 AM
Big congratulations Mohammad, I think it's time for a nap now......... xx
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Mohammad Yamin
Date: 10/28/2012 1:01:00 PM
Thanks for your congratulatory message on the winning of my poem Make Me Sleep in the Poet -Destroyer sponsred competition on 10/26/2012. You are so kind Mandy.
Date: 10/26/2012 9:41:00 PM
Mohammad, CONGRATULATIONS with your awesome poem. :-) thank you for the ZZZZZZZZZZ's~ in my "Send me to sleep....... contest" enjoyed the comfort and thought ~Always & Forever * PD
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Mohammad Yamin
Date: 10/28/2012 12:55:00 PM
Thanks for your congratulatory message. The topic chosen by you was thrilling, indeed. There was scope for writing enchanting poetry on the topic. Thanks for sponsoring.
Date: 6/12/2012 1:12:00 PM
A new gold pearl from you Mohammad, there is only one word to say: Beautiful ! - Have a lovely week and thank you for sharing it. - oxox Anne-Lise
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Date: 6/12/2012 1:32:00 AM
Very beautifully written
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Mohammad Yamin
Date: 6/12/2012 1:25:00 PM
Thanks for your appreciation
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Mohammad Yamin
Date: 6/12/2012 1:15:00 PM
Thanks for your appreciative comment Vienna. I am glad you enjoyed the poem
Date: 6/11/2012 8:13:00 PM
I wonder what it feels like to be this desired woman <3
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Mohammad Yamin
Date: 6/12/2012 12:35:00 PM
Brittany, just imagine if someone were to tell you this, what your feelings would be. Thanks for admiring the poem.

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