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August .14.2024
An Inspirational Poem Poetry Contest
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The gift of life is a wondrous thing. Before aches and pains the onset of age bring, Feast on the glories, God has set, In goblets filled for man to taste. Fill your heart with the elixir of love. Champion the cause of peace as your vow. Act in the Present and look up with hope, For it’s the magic that fills up every cup. Wipe a tear and bring some cheer, That sure will leave you truly dear. Make the weary feel that you care, And lighten the burden that they bear. A glow of warmth when borne on your face, Adds so much more to your innate grace. So light up your face with radiant smiles, And let your laughter ring down the aisles. Nothing lasts ever, it’s wise to learn. So why go crazy for so much to earn? Worldly gains may add up to your fame, But such transient things, your soul may defame!

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Date: 8/15/2024 8:39:00 PM
I felt the encouragement your poem brings!
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Date: 8/15/2024 12:42:00 PM
Hey Valsa.. Your poem is a beautiful and thoughtful reflection on the essence of life and the virtues we should strive to embody. The way it encourages us to embrace life’s joys, while reminding us of the impermanence of material pursuits, offers a profound message. The lines urging us to "Fill your heart with the elixir of love" and to "Champion the cause of peace" are particularly inspiring, as they call for a life led by compassion and hope.
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Date: 8/15/2024 9:52:00 AM
beautiful poem wit great teachings
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Date: 8/15/2024 5:46:00 AM
Good one with some great teaching within. I enjoyed reading it today. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us. Sara K
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Date: 8/15/2024 5:29:00 AM
"Make the weary feel that you care, And lighten the burden that they bear." -- Wise and Christlike. Love your poem.
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Date: 8/14/2024 8:21:00 PM
you do bring cheer dear poet. happy writing.
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Date: 8/14/2024 6:41:00 PM
From the title on through the stanzas, this sounds like a good plan to me, Valsa! :) Gershon
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Date: 8/14/2024 2:30:00 PM
“ Worldly gains may add up to your fame, But such transient things, your soul may defame!” what a powerful ending to your very uplifting and soulful poem dear valsa! I agree with every word, and emanates wisdom within your soul, from your seamless poem flowing with such sublime and authentic rhymes! Its refreshing to read! I hope your heart will always be filled with elixirs of love! Such a beautiful poem this is! “ Feast on the glories, God has set,“ great reminder to be grateful! Count our blessings. Which many often forget to do: pleasure reading this! A fave it is! Sending you light always
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Date: 8/14/2024 12:29:00 PM
WOW!!! I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. A great start to a great ending. So True... "Good Luck" Have a blessed day.............................
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Date: 8/14/2024 5:53:00 AM
Worldy wealth is indeed transient and, to quote Solomon, a "chasing after the wind." Better to let the simple things bring us contentment and to generously give to others. Then our laughter will be pure and genuine. You're always so good Valsa
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