Make It Right [[rap]]

This Is A Quick Rap I Was Thinkin Up. Needs Some Work. And I Need To Work On The 
Structure. 


Boy find your way right/
put down that beautiful glock tonight/ 
yeah the boys callin your name/
sayin tonight you betta have game/
will it really get you fame/
playing with somebodys life/
how you know at home they dont got kids and a wife/
yeah they carry dat gun/
you got dah same one/
dont think they really wanna take away your breath/
put a bullet in your head/
they lookin at you/ 
seeing they own baby growing up too/
hopin that they grow up betta/
learn from daddys mistakes to the letter/
goin on a run/
think a shoot by is fun/
what you gonna do/
when they wanna do a drive by past tha school/
sumbody ends yah home brothas life/
so you go after them to fix it thinking revenge makes everything all right/
you get locked up just a kid/
now your whole life is gonna end/
death is in strife/
its not your decision who gets life or to die/
so boy think about this tonight/
before you get shot, caught, and end up in the pen iight/
sit down and close yah eyes/
dont answer when they start callin from outside/
put that beatiful glock down tonight/
get out before its too late and babii boy/
make your life right/
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Bess Avatar
June 22, 2009 at 6:27 PM
just another day in the hood it was nice but structure was off tho
Al-Riyami Avatar
June 10, 2009 at 12:19 AM
True basic trial of A Ghetto's Life:) Brilliant
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