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Make Believe World

Taking things on face value was a virtue;
make believe facade hurts me, you and you.
New technology can photoshop anything;
us, hacked, laymen have no clue to what's happening.
A coin has two sides, we are forced to choose;
They toss it to stand on its edge, making us lose.
Make believe world is digging a grave to bury truth.
22.6.2020 It's Only Make Believe Poetry Contest of Regina Riddle

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Date: 6/29/2020 2:39:00 PM
Witty, beautifully written and with a lot of wisdom. A big big congratulations! Well deserved.
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 7/8/2020 8:07:00 AM
Thanx Funom for appreciating.
Date: 6/29/2020 2:06:00 AM
Very true Mohan, love your honest reflections
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/29/2020 2:15:00 AM
Chantelle, thanks for your visit and encouragement. Mohan
Date: 6/28/2020 3:13:00 PM
you speak so much truth here. VERY good. Congrats, Mohan.
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/29/2020 2:15:00 AM
Andrea, thanks.
Date: 6/28/2020 9:14:00 AM
Your muse reflects honesty and wisdom Mohan. Really happy to see it in the final list of winners. Congratulations on your win. God bless you :)
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Date: 6/29/2020 2:14:00 AM
Aditi, thankyou so much for your kind words. Best. Mohan
Date: 6/28/2020 5:36:00 AM
Wonderful words. Congrats on your win. Bless you and thank you for your entry, Gina
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Date: 6/28/2020 6:38:00 AM
Gina, thankyou for my placement in your contest and encouraging me. Mohan
Date: 6/28/2020 1:21:00 AM
Hello Mohan Sir, Congratulations for your wonderful win:-) You have portrayed "Make believe" very beautifully .Finishing line is perfect and true.:-) Keep writing and inspiring .Take care. Have a lovely day:-)
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/28/2020 6:39:00 AM
Deepa, glad you like my muse. You also take care. Best. Mohan
Date: 6/22/2020 11:00:00 PM
Couldn't agree more! Beautifully penned! :) SK
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/23/2020 7:38:00 AM
Thanks for your visit, Shubham.

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