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Make An Offering

make an offering pray for guidance and answers interpret riddle

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James Foulk

Date: 7/2/2011 10:30:00 AM

thank you for commenting on The Silence of a falling star.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/30/2011 6:41:00 PM

superb on the haiku precept Jack.. good luck in the contest .. your title is terrific luv.. amazing offering..

James Foulk

Date: 6/30/2011 11:06:00 AM

a great Haiku, enjoyed this one. thank you for commenting on Wisdom for the wise. Your grandfather was a wise man. you can't spank kids over here either, but I will spank my grandson if i have to, wheter it is here or in public, but hopeing i never have to, not because of the law, but i love the little guy to much, it would break my heart to do it.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/30/2011 10:44:00 AM

a beautiful, cryptic message... pure intuition may interpret the riddle?? winning piece if for a contest, jack..:) hugggs, nette