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Make a Wish

A true wish buried in the depth of this unsettled soul
cannot reveal as Love's paradise may find it sown,
The hungry heart blinded by this choice Fate stole
as Chance may offer a blossom for a bliss unknown,
Closed eyes still reach for this wish Hope has grown.
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Form: English Quintain
Date Written: 07/12/2016
Contest Entry: Make a Wish
Contest Sponsor: Kim Merryman
Results: 7th Place

Copyright © Jesse Day | Year Posted 2016

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Bl Devnath Date: 7/29/2016 3:42:00 PM Congrats on your win my friend. It's a lovely poem read from you. A 7. You have used a cute pen here. Hugs, Cloudy Poet. Login to Reply Jesse Day Date: 7/29/2016 7:36:00 PM Thank you!

Constance La France Date: 7/20/2016 8:59:00 AM Jessie, very nice and congratulations on your win ~ Login to Reply Jesse Day Date: 7/26/2016 3:38:00 PM Thank you

Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/18/2016 3:22:00 PM Big congrats to you, Jesse. Login to Reply Jesse Day Date: 7/19/2016 9:44:00 PM Thanks! Jesse

Sara Chansarkar Date: 7/16/2016 2:34:00 PM Its a very beautiful write,thanks for sharing Jesse!Many congrats! Login to Reply Jesse Day Date: 7/16/2016 4:37:00 PM Thank you, Jesse!

Sandra Haight Date: 7/16/2016 2:09:00 PM Yours is a lovely English Quintain, that flows so well and is so full of hope. Congratulations on your fine placement, Jesse, and I hope your wish does come true. 7 Hugs, Sandra Login to Reply Jesse Day Date: 7/16/2016 4:36:00 PM Thanks you, Jesse!

Winged Warrior Date: 7/16/2016 10:40:00 AM Congrats! my friend...beautifully done...god bless...^WW^ Login to Reply Jesse Day Date: 7/16/2016 10:43:00 AM Thank you! Jesse

Janice Canerdy Date: 7/16/2016 7:44:00 AM A 7 for this lovely winning poem, Jesse. Janice Login to Reply Jesse Day Date: 7/16/2016 10:43:00 AM Thank you! Jesse

Alexis Y. Date: 7/15/2016 11:28:00 PM Hi Jessie, I hope that all of your wishes come true. Congrats on your winning write. It was well deserved:-)Alexis Login to Reply Jesse Day Date: 7/16/2016 12:32:00 AM Thank you! Jesse

Sunita U.D Palawon Date: 7/15/2016 11:17:00 PM Congrats on your placement with this superb words. Hope it comes true. :) Sunita. Login to Reply Jesse Day Date: 7/16/2016 12:32:00 AM Thank you!

Kim Merryman Date: 7/15/2016 9:19:00 PM Jesse, congrats on your placement in my contest with this lovely write! Thank you for participating! Login to Reply Jesse Day Date: 7/16/2016 12:35:00 AM Thank you choosing me to be part of your list of winners! It is truly an honor - Jesse

Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/15/2016 5:38:00 PM this is wonderful, Jesse! Good luck in the contest. Login to Reply Jesse Day Date: 7/16/2016 12:35:00 AM Thank you!

David Smith Date: 7/14/2016 6:13:00 AM Good luck with contest. Last line may get you over the line. Very well penned. David from NZ Login to Reply Jesse Day Date: 7/16/2016 12:34:00 AM Thank you!