Jesse Day Poet Quintain (English)

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Make a Wish

A true wish buried in the depth of this unsettled soul
cannot reveal as Love's paradise may find it sown,
The hungry heart blinded by this choice Fate stole
as Chance may offer a blossom for a bliss unknown,
Closed eyes still reach for this wish Hope has grown.
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Form: English Quintain
Date Written: 07/12/2016
Contest Entry: Make a Wish
Contest Sponsor: Kim Merryman
Results: 7th Place

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Bl Devnath July 29, 2016 at 3:42 PM Congrats on your win my friend. It's a lovely poem read from you. A 7. You have used a cute pen here. Hugs, Cloudy Poet. Jesse Day July 29, 2016 at 7:36 PM Thank you!

Constance La France July 20, 2016 at 8:59 AM Jessie, very nice and congratulations on your win ~ Jesse Day July 26, 2016 at 3:38 PM Thank you

Andrea Dietrich July 18, 2016 at 3:22 PM Big congrats to you, Jesse. Jesse Day July 19, 2016 at 9:44 PM Thanks! Jesse

Sara Chansarkar July 16, 2016 at 2:34 PM Its a very beautiful write,thanks for sharing Jesse!Many congrats! Jesse Day July 16, 2016 at 4:37 PM Thank you, Jesse!

Sandra Haight July 16, 2016 at 2:09 PM Yours is a lovely English Quintain, that flows so well and is so full of hope. Congratulations on your fine placement, Jesse, and I hope your wish does come true. 7 Hugs, Sandra Jesse Day July 16, 2016 at 4:36 PM Thanks you, Jesse!

Winged Warrior July 16, 2016 at 10:40 AM Congrats! my friend...beautifully done...god bless...^WW^ Jesse Day July 16, 2016 at 10:43 AM Thank you! Jesse

Janice Canerdy July 16, 2016 at 7:44 AM A 7 for this lovely winning poem, Jesse. Janice Jesse Day July 16, 2016 at 10:43 AM Thank you! Jesse

Alexis Y. July 15, 2016 at 11:28 PM Hi Jessie, I hope that all of your wishes come true. Congrats on your winning write. It was well deserved:-)Alexis Jesse Day July 16, 2016 at 12:32 AM Thank you! Jesse

Sunita U.D Palawon July 15, 2016 at 11:17 PM Congrats on your placement with this superb words. Hope it comes true. :) Sunita. Jesse Day July 16, 2016 at 12:32 AM Thank you!

Kim Merryman July 15, 2016 at 9:19 PM Jesse, congrats on your placement in my contest with this lovely write! Thank you for participating! Jesse Day July 16, 2016 at 12:35 AM Thank you choosing me to be part of your list of winners! It is truly an honor - Jesse

Andrea Dietrich July 15, 2016 at 5:38 PM this is wonderful, Jesse! Good luck in the contest. Jesse Day July 16, 2016 at 12:35 AM Thank you!

David Smith July 14, 2016 at 6:13 AM Good luck with contest. Last line may get you over the line. Very well penned. David from NZ Jesse Day July 16, 2016 at 12:34 AM Thank you!