Make a Wish

A true wish buried in the depth of this unsettled soul cannot reveal as Love's paradise may find it sown, The hungry heart blinded by this choice Fate stole as Chance may offer a blossom for a bliss unknown, Closed eyes still reach for this wish Hope has grown. .......................................... Form: English Quintain Date Written: 07/12/2016 Contest Entry: Make a Wish Contest Sponsor: Kim Merryman Results: 7th Place

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Bl Devnath

Date: 7/29/2016 3:42:00 PM

Congrats on your win my friend. It's a lovely poem read from you. A 7. You have used a cute pen here. Hugs, Cloudy Poet.

Jesse Day
Date: 7/29/2016 7:36:00 PM

Thank you!

Constance La France

Date: 7/20/2016 8:59:00 AM

Jessie, very nice and congratulations on your win ~

Jesse Day
Date: 7/26/2016 3:38:00 PM

Thank you

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/18/2016 3:22:00 PM

Big congrats to you, Jesse.

Jesse Day
Date: 7/19/2016 9:44:00 PM

Thanks! Jesse

Sara Chansarkar

Date: 7/16/2016 2:34:00 PM

Its a very beautiful write,thanks for sharing Jesse!Many congrats!

Jesse Day
Date: 7/16/2016 4:37:00 PM

Thank you, Jesse!

Sandra Haight

Date: 7/16/2016 2:09:00 PM

Yours is a lovely English Quintain, that flows so well and is so full of hope. Congratulations on your fine placement, Jesse, and I hope your wish does come true. 7 Hugs, Sandra

Jesse Day
Date: 7/16/2016 4:36:00 PM

Thanks you, Jesse!