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Make a Splash

Palm trees sway on a sunny day as waves caress the shore Seagulls glide above the tides On balmy wind rides Palm trees sway Dolphins are seen riding the waves real keen on a sunny day Take a dash Then make a splash as waves caress the shore 6-2-2024

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/21/2024 4:38:00 AM

Ahh!! A fun day in the sun or can be if one is really cautious these days. I haven't been to the beach in a long time and would like to go once again. Thanks for sharing your talent with us. Sara K

Brandy Nicole

Date: 6/10/2024 7:43:00 PM

' As waves caress the shore, seagulls glide above the tides. ' Such a peaceful and poetic moment, indeed. Your thoughts take me there, Joseph. This is beautiful in every way. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/8/2024 11:32:00 AM

Indeed making a splash! You are wonderful with this rhyming form.

Jack Horne

Date: 6/5/2024 6:47:00 AM

a beautiful taste of paradise! Thanks for the place in your contest - enjoyed the unique challenge

Ink Empress

Date: 6/4/2024 11:59:00 AM

As an islander, i must say, i loved this! I love dolphins and did swim too with them, and its so soothing and this poem is the same so very soothing and exotic. I must have a look at your contest rules, inspired. Pleasure reading your work always

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/4/2024 2:45:00 AM

Great rhyme and ideas. I love the sea with its mammals jumping the waves.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 6/3/2024 10:03:00 AM

Hey Joe, such a relaxing, breezy vibe. The swaying palms, gliding seagulls, and playful dolphins, it is like I am right at the shoreline. Well done capturing the essence of a perfect beach day! - Blessings, My Friend, Daniel