Make a Poem - My Sweet Hubby

Rithika decorated herself with orange flowers and white pearls,
The beautiful pink silk saree made her so admirable,
Bouquets and wishes filled her hands - it was her first wedding anniversary,
Rithika had made all the arrangements for her wedding eve,
The orders were placed well before,
From the candle light dinner to the costly surprise gift – everything was there,
Except Kamal,
Kamal an civil engineer by profession,
A person known for his excellent technical skills.
His sincere and dedicated work made people appreciate him.
At the same time he was also a warm hearted friend and a genial host.
Rithika waited patiently on the corridor, till the golden sun bid good bye,
“This is highly irritable” she said. Her iris went wet,
“Kamal has changed, he never shows an iota of interest on me” wiping her tears she went in.
A sudden  knock at the door, Rithika ran swiftly,
She opened the door to see Kamal holding a kink-tailed cat in his left hand
“This is absured, is this cat my wedding gift”  she screamed.
Kamal stood puzzled,
The whole room became dark except for those sparkling objects in Kamal’s right hand that emits light.
A beautiful diamond necklace.
Rithika was astonished, 
“This one I bought for you and this one I caught for you” Kamal gave her the two gifts.
Rithika was speechless, she kindly said “you are my generous gift”
Kamal hugged her and love flowed over and over.

32 mins, 9 July,2016
Make a poem contest
Shadow Hamilton

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 7/9/2016 12:08:00 PM
Good luck in the contest.... of course. Linda
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Date: 7/9/2016 1:47:00 PM
Thanks dear
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