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Make-Believe Pie

Why even try to explain, its insane 
when I take a sneak peak at my life,     
I often feel cloned and unreal.       
Reality smacks and I'm under attack  
I dream and I dream like a dope,  
savoring slices of make-believe pie.

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Daniel Henry Rodgers Date: 10/4/2024 6:44:00 AM Dear Rose, What a powerful read. I believe many of us feel that way from time to time. I loved your title expressions of emotions and the metaphor of the mudpie. Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel Login to Reply Mystic Rose Rose Date: 10/4/2024 5:46:00 PM Thank you Daniel for appreciating the poem :)

Yann Rolland Date: 10/4/2024 5:16:00 AM so nice, enjoyed your creative pie, best wishes rose Login to Reply Mystic Rose Rose Date: 10/4/2024 5:46:00 PM Thank you for your comment Yann

Peonieslore xo Date: 10/2/2024 9:44:00 AM I'd like some of that pie, pleasure reading Mystic Login to Reply Mystic Rose Rose Date: 10/2/2024 10:03:00 AM Sure Peonie I'll give you a slice of imagination a slice of passion and a slice of creativity, oh what the heck, take the other piece and make it yours, !

Victor Buhagiar Date: 10/2/2024 9:12:00 AM Hi, Rose. It's only a nasty dream. Sometimes we do go down to the unreal. But you can write wonderful poems. Login to Reply Mystic Rose Rose Date: 10/2/2024 10:03:00 AM I know sometimes I choose a lovely daydream over painful reality

Janice Canerdy Date: 10/2/2024 8:32:00 AM This is a concise, deep, powerful poem, Mystic. Janice Login to Reply Mystic Rose Rose Date: 10/2/2024 10:02:00 AM Thank you Janice, nice to see your here, take care, be well :)

Hiya Sharma Date: 10/2/2024 6:57:00 AM Ahhh, I resonate with this completely and really agree with you on the fact that life can sometimes be really insane! It often feels surreal and that clone thing is so true.. when reality takes all of our time and pulls out of our peaceful dreams ~ you've such an incredible way with words, beautiful Rose and even with such powerfully impactful writes, your quill never loses its elegance.. I love those last two lines which depict how our hearts yearn to savour every moment! Sending love & hugs ~ Login to Reply Mystic Rose Rose Date: 10/2/2024 10:02:00 AM lol, I'll choose a slice of daydream any day to harsh reality dear Hiya, how lovely to see you here today, take care. Bless your tender heart.