Majestic Mountains

Majestic mountains guard the lake,
A piece of heaven here on earth.
Behold it, your breath it will take,
Its pricelessness defies all worth.
Nothing made by man can compare
With nature's architecture so fair.




                     ~~~~~
Francine Roberts
for John Freeman's 'A Nature Verse' contest
13/09/2011
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Fraser Avatar
October 8, 2011 at 1:41 PM
Nothing beats nature's architecture. Man can emulate it. Many congratulations on your deserved win in John's contest Francine. Have a lovely weekend :)
Hill Avatar
September 30, 2011 at 10:55 AM
A fine poem worthy of memorization.
Brown Avatar
September 21, 2011 at 2:17 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest of Moses "A Nature Verse" Francine. Love, Carol
Horne Avatar
September 20, 2011 at 5:04 PM
Beautiful piece, Francine - and so very true. Thanks so much for your comments on my blog - many congrats to you on your wins!
Mehta Avatar
September 19, 2011 at 12:24 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of John, Francine
Johnson Avatar
September 19, 2011 at 2:19 AM
great mountains of the north, great win here babe ...poor ole johnson
Onclaud Avatar
September 19, 2011 at 12:58 AM
a majestic scene that mustifies, francine..cheers and more cheers to you for the great win..:) huggs!
Ramage Avatar
September 19, 2011 at 12:26 AM
Excellent poem, definitely agree, BC has so many beautiful sites. Well done, Lee
Taylor Avatar
September 18, 2011 at 10:47 PM
Congrats on your win, Francine. Nice going. luv Ralph
Haick Avatar
September 18, 2011 at 6:59 PM
Congratulations on a very fine win in John's "Nature" contest, Francine! Love, Annalise
Johnson Avatar
September 18, 2011 at 6:58 PM
very good babe...Have to be quick my wireless is down, so connected through an unprotected wireless nearby??...no password needed....thanks Francine...xox.Don
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September 18, 2011 at 4:21 PM
Francine, thanks for taking the time to offer your memorable verse, the honor was mine in reading this worthy Verse entry. Agape, Moses.
Quigley Avatar
September 18, 2011 at 3:02 PM
A nice entry Francine. Congratulations on your fourth place win
Sweetheart Avatar
September 18, 2011 at 1:59 PM
CONGRATS FRANCINE ON FANTASTIC WIN WITH LOVELY LINES OF POETRY LUV...
Esquire Avatar
September 17, 2011 at 7:33 PM
Dear Francine, This is a winner I'm sure. I live there Do YOU Live on a Mountain? I Thank-YOU for telling me about my Entree to YOUR Contest I've added the last line sorry With LOVE, ALWAYS and FOREVER, YOUR Liege...HG ( Harry )
Quigley Avatar
September 16, 2011 at 10:39 AM
Very nice. You are going to be a tough one to beat. Good luck in the contest
Sweetheart Avatar
September 14, 2011 at 10:25 PM
marvelous depiction of the gorgeous photo for the contest Francine.. so luv the first line.. good luck in the contest.. rare words stand out..luv..
Sivey Avatar
September 14, 2011 at 6:12 PM
Wow Francine, you have created a magnificent write! I really enjoyed this incredible poem! I think the title "Majestic Mountains" is perfect for the poem!! As you have written a majestic write!! You'll do well in the contest!!
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September 14, 2011 at 2:15 PM
Beautiful write Francine on mountains. Thanks for your help. love phyl
Mckenzie Avatar
September 14, 2011 at 9:50 AM
Francine~ Just lovely! Best wishes in the contest boy I won't want to judge that contest its going to be hard! Laura :)
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September 14, 2011 at 3:33 AM
This brings back memories of my glimpses of the Sierra Nevada Range when I was at Lake Tahoe, NV years ago. As usual, good descriptiveness and rhyming.
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