Lee Ramage Poet Haiku

Majestic Lace

crying over creeks,
weeping branches grace the wind--
the mighty willow





Written by Lee Ramage
September 1, 2011
Contest: Constance LaFrance~Rambling Poet’s
“Haiku Me Some Nature, Please”
Placement: Third

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Carol Sunshine Brown September 6, 2011 at 8:42 AM Congratulations on your win in Constance La France's "Haiku Me Some Nature, Please" contest Lee. Love, Carol Lee Ramage September 6, 2011 at 9:37 PM Thanks Carol. Lee

Judy Ball September 6, 2011 at 12:34 AM Very nicely done indeed. Great imagery here. Congrats on your win and God Bless, JB Lee Ramage September 6, 2011 at 12:37 AM Thanks Judy. Lee

Caryl Ramsdale September 5, 2011 at 12:10 PM Congratulations on your placement in the "Haiku Me Some Nature, Please" poetry contest sponsored by Constance La France ~ A Rambling Poet ~.

Andrea Dietrich September 4, 2011 at 8:11 PM So beautiful, and congrats on this wonderful win.

Sara Kendrick September 4, 2011 at 3:39 PM Congrats on your win..My weeping willow crys over my pool that is filled in with dirt..Sara

Kim Merryman September 4, 2011 at 2:27 PM Love the imagery. Congrats on your win! Kim

Black Eyed Susan September 4, 2011 at 2:24 PM so creative. congratulations on your win!

Jack Horne September 4, 2011 at 9:00 AM Many congrats, Lee : )

Dr.Ram Mehta September 4, 2011 at 7:53 AM Congrats on the win in the contest,Lee

David Williams September 4, 2011 at 5:10 AM hey Lee congrats on your great win..David

Nette Onclaud September 4, 2011 at 2:33 AM cheers on your great win, lee! :) huggs!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 3, 2011 at 11:14 PM Congrats Lee on your third place with this stunning entry luv.. vibrant..

James Fraser September 3, 2011 at 8:29 AM I can hear the crying through your fine words Lee. Terrific seasonal images I view. Good luck in the contest, have a lovely weekend :)

Gwendolen Song September 3, 2011 at 12:40 AM Every willow tree has a story of its own, Lee. This is lovely..your willow has emotions, grace, and a mighty stature. Best to you, Gwendolen Lee Ramage September 3, 2011 at 1:03 AM Can you just imagine what some have seen. Thanks so much. Lee

Carol Sunshine Brown September 2, 2011 at 1:40 PM I enjoyed reading your poetry today Lee. I hope you have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol Lee Ramage September 3, 2011 at 1:03 AM Thanks so much Carol. Lee

Kabuteng P.Ink K. September 2, 2011 at 12:15 PM This is really beautiful, Lee :) I really appreciate your imagery here-- there sure is something so graceful about the willow tree-- I think you captured that here :D Lee Ramage September 3, 2011 at 1:04 AM Thanks so much. I think willows are just magnificent. I love them. Lee

Carolyn Devonshire September 2, 2011 at 7:52 AM What an eloquent portaal of the weeping willow "crying over creeks." Beautiful, Lee. Wishing you success in the contest. Love, carolyn Lee Ramage September 3, 2011 at 1:05 AM Thank you Carolyn, hoping you have a lovely and safe weekend. Love Lee

Nette Onclaud September 2, 2011 at 4:15 AM oh, sooo majestic , leee.. congrats on your recent wins; will do the usual greetings when time allows.. and for this one, best wishes again!! .lovely! :) hugs, nette Lee Ramage September 3, 2011 at 1:02 AM Thanks Nette, it was a good week for me. Take care, you've done well also. Lee

Andrea Dietrich September 2, 2011 at 2:00 AM this is quite pretty and elegant like lace!! Lee Ramage September 2, 2011 at 2:36 AM Thanks, hope you have a nice long weekend, summer is almost over, boohoo. Take care Lee

Cyndi Macmillan September 1, 2011 at 11:14 PM Hey Lee, you captured both the mood and the majesty of my favourite tree. Well done, and thanks for your lovely comments on my scribbles. I hope this haiku places tops! Bravo, Cyndi Lee Ramage September 2, 2011 at 12:35 AM Thanks Cyndi.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 1, 2011 at 10:32 PM a lovely portrait in words Lee.. good luck in the contest .. great visuals..luv.. Lee Ramage September 2, 2011 at 12:36 AM Thank you so much. I love the look of our creek running out back lined with these willows. Hope you have a nice long weekend. Lee

Lisa Cooper September 1, 2011 at 9:44 PM thank you for your lovely write and your comment on my poetry. Lee Ramage September 1, 2011 at 10:03 PM Sent you Soup mail, please read. Thanks so much. Lee Lee Ramage September 1, 2011 at 9:45 PM Thanks Lisa, and know I only comment on poems I appreciate. Take care Lee