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Maid-Of-Honor Forever

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She walks down the church aisle quite sadly
Hoping to be someone's queen bride, so dearly


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David Williams’ Twenty/Twenty Contest
By nette onclaud

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Harry Horsman

March 27, 2012 at 10:30 AM

late with this one nette, congrats wonderful winner. harry

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

March 4, 2012 at 10:14 PM

Congrats, Nette, on a great win! Blessings, Rhonda

Sara Kendrick

March 4, 2012 at 1:46 PM

Enjoyed this expressive work..I am glad that I chose it to read today..Congrats on your win..Sara

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

March 3, 2012 at 11:10 AM

I hope this is not you, nette!! Super congrats and thanks for asking, my mom is doing relatively good :) I hope all's well with you! hugs :D

Ralph Taylor

March 3, 2012 at 8:35 AM

Congrats, nette. Excellent. Great job. Nice going. Thanks for your recent comments. Have a great weekend, my friend. Best to you and yours. luv and hugs, Ralph

Andrea Dietrich

March 2, 2012 at 11:50 PM

this one is GREAT, Nette. congrats on the winners' list, my friend.

Poet Destroyer A

March 2, 2012 at 8:07 PM

NETTE... CONGRATULATIONS ..ON YOUR WONDERFUL WIN~ Have yourself a very nice night ;-)*always..pd

Olusegun Arowolo

March 2, 2012 at 5:31 PM

Nice work,Nette.Congratulations on your win...

Samual Ronthorpe

March 2, 2012 at 4:40 PM

Nette, wonderful work. Congrats on making David's winners' list.....................S.Ronthorpe

Debbie Guzzi

March 2, 2012 at 11:15 AM

We are made to think that walk is our highest possible achievement, very sad! Congrad's Light & Love

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

March 2, 2012 at 9:55 AM

congrats Nette luv on another brilliant beauty win for a grand composition for contest luv.. u OK???

Kash Poet

March 2, 2012 at 7:14 AM

Nette congratulations on another top ten win.Enjoyed.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

March 2, 2012 at 6:07 AM

Congratulations nette poor girl xx

Carol Sunshine Brown

March 2, 2012 at 5:47 AM

Congratulations on your win in David William's "Twenty/Twenty" contest Nette. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

February 25, 2012 at 11:07 PM

Hi...Nette...back here again... i send you soup mail early today..can you please send me.. what i send you..so i can post it on my blog...to keep track of all the poets who are writing for my poem... thank you..i'll be back..in the morning..always..pd

Russell Sivey

February 25, 2012 at 4:12 PM

A maid of honor who desperately wants to be married, sadly she meanders down the aisle slowly crying softly as she does so! This is what I envisioned with your poem with the liberty of maybe a couple of parts! I really enjoyed your write that I read this afternoon! Great Work!! PS I noticed there is only 15 syllables in your poem. I think your were working on Twenty syllables, but you never quite reached it. I'm sorry to tell you this. I hope this helps.

Jack Horne

February 25, 2012 at 11:59 AM

Awww, I hope the best man falls for her! Lovely write, Nette. Many congrats on your wins, my friend : )

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

February 25, 2012 at 10:01 AM

well Nette luv many a lady will absorb these words penned today for truth and hope too.. good luuck in contest by David.. luv.. so glad we all heard from DConstance too.. sh is at a low point but we hopefully lifted her spirits ..