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With such feminine flamboyancy this maiden sways in breathtaking movements flashing, flitting, flaming a sweet minuet-- beneath a mural of moonlight’s alchemy, her flared gown fair as sequined feathers that midway, in birdsong's sultry melody, her flight of fancy floats on my garden- floor and like a magical sylph in tints of magenta, she mingles with blooms on lawn's mainstage— oh this femme fatale; a Mayflower, mantling the pageant of summer's first festival! For Brian Strand : Alliteration Contest

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Date: 4/28/2018 8:43:00 AM
My friend, you never fail in delivering truly exceptional poetry. The depths, colors and creativity in your poems always awe me! A fav....
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Date: 4/21/2018 6:23:00 PM
Hello Nette, I can just picture the maiden swaying in the garden. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 4/3/2018 9:41:00 PM
Congratulations on your win,Nette, excellent alliteration and personification. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 4/3/2018 3:59:00 PM
What a darling poem. Congrats on your win, nette.
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Date: 4/3/2018 7:55:00 AM
Beautiful, Nette. Many congrats on your win. Elaine
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Date: 4/2/2018 9:59:00 PM
I see that you have entered"Silent One's" contest requiring this write to incorporate "personification"...so dear poet, are you the "femme fatale" ? *Winks...I LOVE this write ! Sweet dreams Nette...much love, james
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Date: 4/2/2018 6:57:00 PM
Nette, your graceful poetic lines of lovely imagery and alliteration possess the beauty and delicacy of fine lace - just splendid. Congratulation on your fantastic win. Warmest wishes..
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Date: 4/1/2018 3:18:00 PM
- The winners are named and it was great to see your poem on the winning list - Congratulations, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/1/2018 3:02:00 PM
Some nice use of alliteration in your poem Nette.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest...
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Date: 4/1/2018 1:55:00 PM
Truly exceptional creation my friend. You never fail to awe me with the beauty, depth and creativity of your verses! A fav..
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Date: 3/31/2018 5:45:00 PM
How beautiful, Nette.
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Date: 3/30/2018 3:37:00 PM
Written with eloquence, nette! I wish you well in the contest
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Date: 3/30/2018 11:33:00 AM
- Beautifully written, Nette - Best wishes in the contest - Happy Easter :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/30/2018 10:43:00 AM
Spectacular images flow from this poem, nette. i look to see it at the top. Splendid poetry as always. You never disappoint!
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Date: 3/30/2018 9:19:00 AM
This is beautifully written Nette. I enjoyed it very much :)
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Date: 3/30/2018 8:40:00 AM
Magnificent dear, Nette! Good luck my friend!
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Date: 3/30/2018 7:29:00 AM
Lovely, nette. Wonderful imagery.
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Date: 3/30/2018 6:30:00 AM
I like the alliterative breaks leading to the merry flair of a season through a flower. Brilliantly done! Thank you for reading my poem.
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Date: 3/30/2018 5:37:00 AM
Very articulate, delicate, and delightful..well done, nette..a winning poem.
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