Maiden Voyage

In Newfoundland, titanic iceberg swimming Southeast. Inspired by Raul Moreno's Contest "Six Word Masterpieces"

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Doris Culverhouse

Date: 1/21/2010 4:46:00 PM

enjoyed reading today, hope you are fine!!

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 1/14/2010 5:30:00 PM

Never caught this one either HG. Brilliant 6 worder here.Talk about a story! -Robert

Date: 1/1/2010 2:47:00 PM

Just wanted to drop by and wish you HAPPY NEW YEAR! May you have another successful year of writing. Keep on sharing your thoughts with us. Karen

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/26/2009 7:41:00 AM

Yes, a good job with this one! (thanks for your warm welcome to me on my acrostic) andrea

Elaine George

Date: 12/22/2009 1:24:00 PM

Wow! you have told the entire story and painted vivid images of the entire voyage and disaster all in 6 words. BARVO!!!!! dear HGarvey. A winner in my books. Wishing you a Merry Christmas and all the best to you my friend, in the New Year. Love, Lainie

Colleen Bono

Date: 12/22/2009 10:35:00 AM

I haven't forgot about your challenge to me I am still working on it.It will just come to me one day and I will write it.Have to be in poetic mode so to say.HAPPY HOLIDAYS,and hope all is well.

Date: 12/21/2009 1:05:00 PM

Interesting perspective in this poem. Good luck in the contest. I hope you are having a wonderful Christmas season. Karen

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 12/20/2009 11:39:00 AM

HG..Wonderful..alot said in 6 words. Barbeeg..

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 12/19/2009 10:49:00 PM

Great work of the pen! Good luck on Raul's contest. Caroline.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 12/19/2009 10:36:00 PM

Excellent work as always,If i don't have time to visit you again in these days cos im pretty busy,I just wanna wish you a peaceful Christmas and a good Healthy Happy New Year,my dear friend,...Charma

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/19/2009 8:21:00 PM

Good luck on your fabulous entry for Raul's contest.. I entered Disenchanted.. this is a so fun contest... hope all is well with u my beau... blessings... luv... as I am looking at 20 inches of snow here in New Jersey today... bummer...Linda-Marie "Sweetie"