Maiden Voyage

In Newfoundland, titanic iceberg swimming Southeast.

Inspired by Raul Moreno's Contest "Six Word Masterpieces"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Culverhouse Avatar
January 21, 2010 at 4:46 PM
enjoyed reading today, hope you are fine!!
Dufresne Avatar
January 14, 2010 at 5:30 PM
Never caught this one either HG. Brilliant 6 worder here.Talk about a story! -Robert
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January 1, 2010 at 2:47 PM
Just wanted to drop by and wish you HAPPY NEW YEAR! May you have another successful year of writing. Keep on sharing your thoughts with us. Karen
Dietrich Avatar
December 26, 2009 at 7:41 AM
Yes, a good job with this one! (thanks for your warm welcome to me on my acrostic) andrea
George   Avatar
December 22, 2009 at 1:24 PM
Wow! you have told the entire story and painted vivid images of the entire voyage and disaster all in 6 words. BARVO!!!!! dear HGarvey. A winner in my books. Wishing you a Merry Christmas and all the best to you my friend, in the New Year. Love, Lainie
Bono Avatar
December 22, 2009 at 10:35 AM
I haven't forgot about your challenge to me I am still working on it.It will just come to me one day and I will write it.Have to be in poetic mode so to say.HAPPY HOLIDAYS,and hope all is well.
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December 21, 2009 at 1:05 PM
Interesting perspective in this poem. Good luck in the contest. I hope you are having a wonderful Christmas season. Karen
Gorelick Avatar
December 20, 2009 at 11:39 AM
HG..Wonderful..alot said in 6 words. Barbeeg..
Delacroix Avatar
December 19, 2009 at 10:49 PM
Great work of the pen! Good luck on Raul's contest. Caroline.
Chircop Avatar
December 19, 2009 at 10:36 PM
Excellent work as always,If i don't have time to visit you again in these days cos im pretty busy,I just wanna wish you a peaceful Christmas and a good Healthy Happy New Year,my dear friend,...Charma
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December 19, 2009 at 8:21 PM
Good luck on your fabulous entry for Raul's contest.. I entered Disenchanted.. this is a so fun contest... hope all is well with u my beau... blessings... luv... as I am looking at 20 inches of snow here in New Jersey today... bummer...Linda-Marie "Sweetie"
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