Maiden On the Misty Beach

Maiden alone on the misty beach
Dressed in fine voile like fabric and hat
Is your desire for your sailor a miraculous feat
Wishing him home and close to your heart

The waves are slow and gently crest
Clouds are close and filled with gray
Closely you look at the sand and express
The desire to see if any boats enter the bay

How many days do you spend this way
Sitting on the soft damp sand in the gray
Or sunshine hoping that the ships may
Come this way and there be a wave

From the special one the one true love
The sailor who spends time on deck
Cleaning, scouring, scrubbing above
Hoping to see maybe, just maybe a speck

Of land where there sits his maiden
The love and desire of his heart
Who on a shore does sit waiting 
For her sailor to come home, never part


("Iphigeneia at Tauris" 1893 Valentine Alexander Serov (l865-1911/Russia) Oil on Canvas".)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Meade Stephenson Avatar
December 29, 2009 at 7:41 PM
A beautiful scene you have captured here in words Sara...as breathtaking as the painting. Exceptional imagery! Thanks so much for sharing and for your taking the time to read my writes. Many thanks too for your always kind comments...all is deeply appreciated! Have a wonderful evening~Mary
Fraser Avatar
December 18, 2009 at 12:55 PM
Just delightful Sara >> James
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December 17, 2009 at 3:08 PM
nice work mom, hope you are well!
Richards Avatar
December 15, 2009 at 8:58 AM
I looked this up....and your poem does it great justice! Lovely work, Sara! Love, Carrie.......ps..thank you for all your kind comments.! Merry Christmas!
Shango Avatar
December 15, 2009 at 7:29 AM
A powerful transformation of sight to sound ... for art like energy here is changed from form to another ... and you have accomplished a perfection.
Owens Avatar
December 14, 2009 at 7:32 PM
Beautiful and very nice Sara...enjoyed...hope you're doing okay...Marty
Sweetheart Avatar
December 14, 2009 at 7:19 PM
Such beautiful poetry.. such a lovely and loving flow to it like music almost... greatly enjoyed... blessings... luv... Linda-Marie...
Hockaday Avatar
December 14, 2009 at 4:34 PM
Ok ur poem displays more than the average talent level-u inspire me to get more depth and reach for new hieghts. Thanks for your dedication to your craft and your good writting skills
Brown Avatar
December 14, 2009 at 3:34 PM
As I am sitting here reading your wonderful poetry today, I would like to thank you Sara. First I would like to thank you for writing and sharing your poetry (whether one poem or a thousand) here at PoetrySoup.Second I would like to thank you for all your kind comments to me and to all the other excellent poets also. I wish you all the best in life and in your writing endeavors in 2010. Love and blessings to all, Carol
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