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Maiden On the Misty Beach

Maiden alone on the misty beach Dressed in fine voile like fabric and hat Is your desire for your sailor a miraculous feat Wishing him home and close to your heart The waves are slow and gently crest Clouds are close and filled with gray Closely you look at the sand and express The desire to see if any boats enter the bay How many days do you spend this way Sitting on the soft damp sand in the gray Or sunshine hoping that the ships may Come this way and there be a wave From the special one the one true love The sailor who spends time on deck Cleaning, scouring, scrubbing above Hoping to see maybe, just maybe a speck Of land where there sits his maiden The love and desire of his heart Who on a shore does sit waiting For her sailor to come home, never part ("Iphigeneia at Tauris" 1893 Valentine Alexander Serov (l865-1911/Russia) Oil on Canvas".)

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Date: 12/29/2009 7:41:00 PM
A beautiful scene you have captured here in words Sara...as breathtaking as the painting. Exceptional imagery! Thanks so much for sharing and for your taking the time to read my writes. Many thanks too for your always kind comments...all is deeply appreciated! Have a wonderful evening~Mary
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Date: 12/18/2009 12:55:00 PM
Just delightful Sara >> James
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Date: 12/17/2009 3:08:00 PM
nice work mom, hope you are well!
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Date: 12/15/2009 8:58:00 AM
I looked this up....and your poem does it great justice! Lovely work, Sara! Love, Carrie.......ps..thank you for all your kind comments.! Merry Christmas!
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Date: 12/15/2009 7:29:00 AM
A powerful transformation of sight to sound ... for art like energy here is changed from form to another ... and you have accomplished a perfection.
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Date: 12/14/2009 7:32:00 PM
Beautiful and very nice Sara...enjoyed...hope you're doing okay...Marty
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Date: 12/14/2009 7:19:00 PM
Such beautiful poetry.. such a lovely and loving flow to it like music almost... greatly enjoyed... blessings... luv... Linda-Marie...
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Date: 12/14/2009 4:34:00 PM
Ok ur poem displays more than the average talent level-u inspire me to get more depth and reach for new hieghts. Thanks for your dedication to your craft and your good writting skills
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Date: 12/14/2009 3:34:00 PM
As I am sitting here reading your wonderful poetry today, I would like to thank you Sara. First I would like to thank you for writing and sharing your poetry (whether one poem or a thousand) here at PoetrySoup.Second I would like to thank you for all your kind comments to me and to all the other excellent poets also. I wish you all the best in life and in your writing endeavors in 2010. Love and blessings to all, Carol
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