Maiden On the Beach

Full moon bright
Through clouded sky
Aqua waters
Three doves fly
 
Golden sands
Grace the shore
Dark haired maiden
Whom i adore
 
Her body wet
As waves caress
Clothes clinging
Shaped finesse
 
On one knee 
Her pose so sweet
A rose drifts in
For the maiden on the beach


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Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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Date: 7/6/2009 10:37:00 AM
The desire for your maiden, lovely and romantic!
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Date: 7/4/2009 10:48:00 PM
Beautiful imagery, so passionate and romantic. Amazing write!
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Date: 7/4/2009 3:43:00 PM
You m my dear, have the most romantic soul. The rose was a perfect touch. BG
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Date: 7/4/2009 12:59:00 PM
I love it. I have been trying to write one about a running rose. I can feel it but can't get it to flow. Seens we are thinking along a similiar path. Sara
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Date: 7/4/2009 8:08:00 AM
beautiful verses--romantic--you are in the muze my friend,:)well penned----charma
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Date: 7/4/2009 6:43:00 AM
Wow, a subtle and sweet romance. A gift from nature. And omnipotent love from a distance. This is a very endearing write. Lovingly, Dane
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Date: 7/4/2009 5:19:00 AM
Lovely and Beautyful Visuals=)
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