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Maiden On the Beach

Full moon bright Through clouded sky Aqua waters Three doves fly Golden sands Grace the shore Dark haired maiden Whom i adore Her body wet As waves caress Clothes clinging Shaped finesse On one knee Her pose so sweet A rose drifts in For the maiden on the beach http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/love2.php

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Charlene Bird

Date: 7/6/2009 10:37:00 AM

The desire for your maiden, lovely and romantic!

Ashley Yates

Date: 7/4/2009 10:48:00 PM

Beautiful imagery, so passionate and romantic. Amazing write!

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 7/4/2009 3:43:00 PM

You m my dear, have the most romantic soul. The rose was a perfect touch. BG

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/4/2009 12:59:00 PM

I love it. I have been trying to write one about a running rose. I can feel it but can't get it to flow. Seens we are thinking along a similiar path. Sara

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 7/4/2009 8:08:00 AM

beautiful verses--romantic--you are in the muze my friend,:)well penned----charma

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 7/4/2009 6:43:00 AM

Wow, a subtle and sweet romance. A gift from nature. And omnipotent love from a distance. This is a very endearing write. Lovingly, Dane

Sajdah Al-Riyami

Date: 7/4/2009 5:19:00 AM

Lovely and Beautyful Visuals=)