James Fraser Poet Rhyme

Maiden On the Beach

Full moon bright
Through clouded sky
Aqua waters
Three doves fly
 
Golden sands
Grace the shore
Dark haired maiden
Whom i adore
 
Her body wet
As waves caress
Clothes clinging
Shaped finesse
 
On one knee 
Her pose so sweet
A rose drifts in
For the maiden on the beach


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Charlene Bird July 6, 2009 at 10:37 AM The desire for your maiden, lovely and romantic!

Ashley Yates July 4, 2009 at 10:48 PM Beautiful imagery, so passionate and romantic. Amazing write!

Barbara Gorelick July 4, 2009 at 3:43 PM You m my dear, have the most romantic soul. The rose was a perfect touch. BG

Sara Kendrick July 4, 2009 at 12:59 PM I love it. I have been trying to write one about a running rose. I can feel it but can't get it to flow. Seens we are thinking along a similiar path. Sara

Charmaine Chircop July 4, 2009 at 8:08 AM beautiful verses--romantic--you are in the muze my friend,:)well penned----charma

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen July 4, 2009 at 6:43 AM Wow, a subtle and sweet romance. A gift from nature. And omnipotent love from a distance. This is a very endearing write. Lovingly, Dane

Sajdah Al-Riyami July 4, 2009 at 5:19 AM Lovely and Beautyful Visuals=)