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Maiden Love

From the tales of old, it has always been known Young hearts are flaky, full of rush and verve Lying in wait, lingering at love's gate To find a soul mate, to heal a heartache Your quest, a failure, to date Yet still you confide in fate Hoping on hope from up above Where every two hearts are made in love But you must have paused to ponder Why chase a thing you do not know? Gazing into the skies, you wonder If it will find you, like a besetting snow O what you'd give to live through the thrill Of true love's first kiss They say it's a remedy to all ills That puts everything in bliss If cupid ever grant you a gentle borrow Know this, it will not be as they told No love can promise a life of no sorrow For true love confounds as you get old

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 6/2/2015 8:10:00 PM
The words suggest you're still young, but the wisdom shows a mind beyond your actual age. This is a lovely poem, Wilfred. Kim :-)
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Wilfred Aniagyei
Date: 9/3/2015 3:31:00 AM
Thank you, Kim..... Your kind words r much appreciated
Date: 6/1/2015 4:15:00 PM
Wilfred, you have penned a lovely poem of love, many awesome lines, the line "no love can promise a life of no sorrow" this is so true, well done and thanks for visiting my poem, shameonyou
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Wilfred Aniagyei
Date: 6/2/2015 4:17:00 PM
Thanks Broken Wings!!......indeed no love can......really appreciate the visit!
Date: 5/22/2015 2:51:00 PM
Wilfred, very nicely written with good flow and thanks for visiting my poem, sad tears
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Wilfred Aniagyei
Date: 5/26/2015 4:09:00 AM
Thanks, Broken Wings.......Really enjoyed sad tears too.....related to your profile pic tho lol
Date: 5/19/2015 2:24:00 PM
Lovely words Wilfred, A well put together piece about true love Best Wishes Kevin
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Wilfred Aniagyei
Date: 5/21/2015 4:40:00 AM
Thanks for your kind words, Kevin .... Was hard finding the right perspective on this topic
Date: 5/19/2015 2:05:00 PM
I really enjoyed this Wilfred. Maiden Love is a highly relevant topic for me. a tricky thing but remember, true love hides where you don't expect it
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Wilfred Aniagyei
Date: 5/21/2015 4:42:00 AM
Quite true, Isaac...Nothing hides forever.... Enjoyed 'no man's nomad girl' too ..... liked its relation to this somehow

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