James Fraser Poet Rhyme

Maid of the Sea

Water born maid
Sensuous siren is she
Torso of woman
Tail from the sea
 
Scaled shape
Naked to the waist
Long haired siren
Men long to taste
 
Mythical babes
Enchantment of men
Lured to love
In her forbidden den
 
Are they Atlante-an beings
From a forgotten past
Or a species outright
Or an evolution past 


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Misty Hoot July 6, 2009 at 3:40 PM Love this! :) You write about her as if you've had a love affair. Its makes your imagination work. I just added you to my favorite poets, James. You're amazing!

Charmaine Chircop June 30, 2009 at 9:48 PM the maid of the sea,i love the mermaid,the free sweet wild creature maiden of the sea----and you my friend seem to have a soft spot for her too,great tribute to the maid of the sea;)--charma

Carol Sunshine Brown June 30, 2009 at 11:11 AM Beautiful !!!!!!!! James this was awesome . Love, Carol

Charlene Bird June 30, 2009 at 6:52 AM Great write James! The first and last stanza's are killers!

Barbara Gorelick June 29, 2009 at 8:13 PM Mr Highlander..this is terrific.I like it all but love the first stanza. BG

Brandy Megens June 29, 2009 at 2:59 PM INTRESTING FULL AND GREAT IMAGERY YOU ARE A FAB POET MY FRIEND SO DIVERSAL THANKS FOR THE COMMENTS

Hyle Chu June 29, 2009 at 2:46 PM "Torso of woman / Tail from the sea," is well written. I like the whole thing. Nice write.