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Maid of the Sea

Water born maid Sensuous siren is she Torso of woman Tail from the sea Scaled shape Naked to the waist Long haired siren Men long to taste Mythical babes Enchantment of men Lured to love In her forbidden den Are they Atlante-an beings From a forgotten past Or a species outright Or an evolution past http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/myth.php

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/6/2009 3:40:00 PM
Love this! :) You write about her as if you've had a love affair. Its makes your imagination work. I just added you to my favorite poets, James. You're amazing!
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Date: 6/30/2009 9:48:00 PM
the maid of the sea,i love the mermaid,the free sweet wild creature maiden of the sea----and you my friend seem to have a soft spot for her too,great tribute to the maid of the sea;)--charma
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Date: 6/30/2009 11:11:00 AM
Beautiful !!!!!!!! James this was awesome . Love, Carol
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Date: 6/30/2009 6:52:00 AM
Great write James! The first and last stanza's are killers!
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Date: 6/29/2009 8:13:00 PM
Mr Highlander..this is terrific.I like it all but love the first stanza. BG
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Date: 6/29/2009 2:59:00 PM
INTRESTING FULL AND GREAT IMAGERY YOU ARE A FAB POET MY FRIEND SO DIVERSAL THANKS FOR THE COMMENTS
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Date: 6/29/2009 2:46:00 PM
"Torso of woman / Tail from the sea," is well written. I like the whole thing. Nice write.
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