Maid of the Myth

He knew her well in his youth.
She was refined, he uncouth.
Maiden so fair
now see her there
drowning in his gin/vermouth

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 11/2/2016 7:29:00 PM
A barfly so was he...drowning his misery...a lost soul...has no role...nor'll have a place in history
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Date: 11/2/2016 11:09:00 PM
:-) just another wasted olive!
Date: 11/2/2016 11:49:00 AM
he was wallowing in self pity, thinking of young firm titties, climbed in a bottle, walked with a waddle, that's just life in the big city
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Date: 11/2/2016 11:00:00 PM
Now you sound like Jack!;-) but, that's the story... cheers! ~j
Date: 11/2/2016 9:07:00 AM
Not sure how to read this, was fair Maiden a more refined fire imbibed at one time and now she's a sloppy lush? :)
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Date: 11/2/2016 10:57:00 PM
Well, for me it was always a mermaid in the bottle;-)
Date: 11/2/2016 8:40:00 AM
Change is good they say. :) This was fun, nice one.
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Date: 11/2/2016 10:55:00 PM
Thanks Chris. Change goes down easier when our horse wins;-)
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