Maid of the Mountain - Who Are You - Fantasy Character Contest

I am the maid of the mountain
Hovering above the hills
Looking for lost souls
To guide them on their way
Back to the warmth of their today

Me, I have no one to love
Tragedy forsook me young
I now relive in the imagination of others
I can see them, they imagine me
I am the answer to many a prayer

I soothe the souls of despair
Asking nothing in return
I spend my days watching and waiting
One day my spirit will be free
To twist and turn through destiny
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January 7, 2014 at 1:18 AM
Congratulations... xox..PD
Bunch Avatar
December 3, 2013 at 6:23 PM
I almost went for humor in my comment, but surely your poem is too nice for my barbarism. I like the poem, is it truly fantasy or do you see these elements in yourself? Do you see this as your fate? Great work Seren, you should do great in the contest
Roberts Avatar
December 8, 2013 at 1:58 AM
Wayland any comment would be appreciated ...Seren
Sivey Avatar
December 2, 2013 at 8:26 AM
Another awesome write by you my friend! I'm glad you have posted again, I have missed your presence Seren! I surely loved reading this delightful poem here this morning! What a brilliant piece, Great Work!!
Roberts Avatar
December 8, 2013 at 1:59 AM
Russell, many thanks for your comments ...Seren
Mehta Avatar
December 2, 2013 at 4:39 AM
Nice character sketch of maid of the mountain, Seren
Roberts Avatar
December 8, 2013 at 2:00 AM
Ram thank you for your comment ...Seren
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