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Six magpies brought their mourning squawk,
soon joined by several others,
disturbing all their neighbour's talk 
and waking sleepy lovers.

Some hopped and did their swaggered strut 
between a felted flat roof top 
and a guttered water but. 
Some preferred a higher perch 
and troubled nearby taller tops of green leylandii.
 
All the while their squawk increased
and shattered suburb's morning peace.

Two black crows flew overhead and settled, 
one on gable top, the other found his place to stop 
and watch from nearby psychamore.
Upright, silent, silhouettes, 
not bearers of the magpie pall 
but undertaking nonetheless 
to show crow's dignified respects. 

They joined this congregation 
to recognise corvid's connect.
They joined this chorused agitation
while magpies mourned their murdered son, 
crumpled feathers low on grassy ground,
til course of squawk and strut had run,
and one by one they flew, without a sound, 
and all was done, and all was done.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 6/10/2020 7:39:00 AM
the title pulled me in and you told a fabulous story in vivid detail guess its natures way but its hard to see - love the collective noun from crows being a murder it is very apt!:-) hugs jan xx
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Bob Kimmerling
Date: 6/10/2020 9:26:00 AM
Hi Jan this happened yesterday morning and for those in earshot like me drew much attention. I researched it and figured that the poem was what I had witnessed, including the two crows who very deliberately seemed to come and pay respects...extraordinary! Bless you

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