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Magnolias

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Cherl Dunn

Date: 2/3/2014 5:20:00 PM

A wonderment of poetic design loved each line and meaning, wow is the best way that i can discribe it. absolutely marvelious. cheri

James Kelley

Date: 1/11/2014 6:29:00 AM

Stellar imagery...this is absolutely poetry at it's finest, wow!

Cherl Dunn

Date: 1/6/2014 1:35:00 AM

Now this is real writting bravo lady i felt every line so visual a wonderful classical write here. cheri

Harry Horsman

Date: 12/27/2013 5:07:00 PM

this is so clever,,, beautiful and inspiring...

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/27/2013 3:31:00 PM

You always write so beautifully Charma, . Hope you had a wonderful Christmas with family. - Thank you for the hi... LINDA

Mustapha Mohammed

Date: 12/27/2013 3:13:00 PM

I feel the emotions inked in this poem,I smell the petals and the shores wavering at my feet. Impressive poem!!

Isaiah Zerbst

Date: 12/26/2013 11:51:00 AM

Hello Charmaine! I remember reading your haiku, so this poem was neat to see what you did with them. Happy new years! Great to read your poetry again. I enjoy the mixture of music, aromatic flowers, and sweet sadness.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/24/2013 7:27:00 AM

Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!! Merry, Merry Christmas To You And Your Family!!! Sara

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/20/2013 7:39:00 PM

Nice job little one! Light & Love

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/20/2013 4:06:00 AM

Enjoyed the write on the selected quote and congrats on the fine win, Charmaine

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/19/2013 8:51:00 PM

Charmine, , Congratulations on your awesome win... always~ LINDA

Kelly Deschler

Date: 12/19/2013 7:17:00 PM

A beautifully written poem that expresses your passion and devotion for a lost love. Wonderful work, Charmaine! I see that this has placed in Giorgio's contest, congratulations on that, as well!...Thank you for the great comments. I do appreciate it very much!

Tim Ryerson

Date: 12/19/2013 6:53:00 PM

Oh yes indeed my good friend..Another romantic gem from the Italian Princess..."But what is a song without its symphony, what is music with no slow dance"--- I am in awe of your talent dear lady...

Tim Ryerson
Date: 12/19/2013 6:57:00 PM

So: Cheer up, Chircop!...You should know by now It's your: Karma, Charma

Donna Jones

Date: 12/19/2013 2:43:00 PM

Lovely as always! Congratulations!!!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/19/2013 11:56:00 AM

- Congratulations on your winning poem Charmaine in: Relate your poem to one of these quotes, Contest - Sponsored by: Giorgio V. - Nice to participate - and enjoyable to read ALL winning poems! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Abdulhafeez Oyewole

Date: 12/19/2013 10:15:00 AM

Congrats Charm!

Mark Peterson

Date: 12/18/2013 12:39:00 AM

This is utterly transfixing, mesmerizing poetry, and I enjoyed every word. Sorry I can't respond thematically--touching any part would detract from the whole.

Chris Boskovski

Date: 12/17/2013 4:59:00 PM

Beautiful poem Charma! I enjoyed it very much, my heart is warmed to such a beautiful poem as this. I love the title as well, very clever! I love it! :) great write my dear! :) Well done. Hugs and kisses all around for you my dear! :) xoxoxo

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/17/2013 11:58:00 AM

- Beautiful poem from you, Charmaine ! - All the best to you - I wish you a beautiful and peaceful Christmas! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 12/17/2013 8:39:00 AM

Tnks for all your kind comments dear friends..

David Williams

Date: 12/17/2013 8:37:00 AM

Charma this is an outstanding piece of work and I particularly love the way you adapted this from another poetry form, that is the sign of true talent, well done…David

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/17/2013 7:43:00 AM

and thanks , sweetie, for your several comments on my recent poetry.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/17/2013 7:43:00 AM

wowowow. one of your BEST, Charma. GEtting inspired by your former beautiful haiku AND the quotes to produce this gem. FAVE

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/17/2013 7:40:00 AM

bewitched, totally.. this is a gem, charms; wow!... huggs

Eileen Manassian

Date: 12/16/2013 3:19:00 PM

WOW! This is lovely, my dear. You read this so beautiful on Drake's show....So enchanting..........Good luck on contest........Slow dance.......YES! Hugs

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 12/17/2013 8:41:00 AM

Eileen i answered in Ruben s box by mistake..sorry : )