Magnolias

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Dunn Avatar
February 3, 2014 at 5:20 PM
A wonderment of poetic design loved each line and meaning, wow is the best way that i can discribe it. absolutely marvelious. cheri
Kelley Avatar
January 11, 2014 at 6:29 AM
Stellar imagery...this is absolutely poetry at it's finest, wow!
Dunn Avatar
January 6, 2014 at 1:35 AM
Now this is real writting bravo lady i felt every line so visual a wonderful classical write here. cheri
Horsman Avatar
December 27, 2013 at 5:07 PM
this is so clever,,, beautiful and inspiring...
A   Avatar
December 27, 2013 at 3:31 PM
You always write so beautifully Charma, . Hope you had a wonderful Christmas with family. - Thank you for the hi... LINDA
Mohammed Avatar
December 27, 2013 at 3:13 PM
I feel the emotions inked in this poem,I smell the petals and the shores wavering at my feet. Impressive poem!!
Zerbst Avatar
December 26, 2013 at 11:51 AM
Hello Charmaine! I remember reading your haiku, so this poem was neat to see what you did with them. Happy new years! Great to read your poetry again. I enjoy the mixture of music, aromatic flowers, and sweet sadness.
Kendrick Avatar
December 24, 2013 at 7:27 AM
Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!! Merry, Merry Christmas To You And Your Family!!! Sara
Guzzi Avatar
December 20, 2013 at 7:39 PM
Nice job little one! Light & Love
Mehta Avatar
December 20, 2013 at 4:06 AM
Enjoyed the write on the selected quote and congrats on the fine win, Charmaine
A   Avatar
December 19, 2013 at 8:51 PM
Charmine, , Congratulations on your awesome win... always~ LINDA
Deschler Avatar
December 19, 2013 at 7:17 PM
A beautifully written poem that expresses your passion and devotion for a lost love. Wonderful work, Charmaine! I see that this has placed in Giorgio's contest, congratulations on that, as well!...Thank you for the great comments. I do appreciate it very much!
Ryerson Avatar
December 19, 2013 at 6:53 PM
Oh yes indeed my good friend..Another romantic gem from the Italian Princess..."But what is a song without its symphony, what is music with no slow dance"--- I am in awe of your talent dear lady...
Ryerson Avatar
December 19, 2013 at 6:57 PM
So: Cheer up, Chircop!...You should know by now It's your: Karma, Charma
Jones Avatar
December 19, 2013 at 2:43 PM
Lovely as always! Congratulations!!!
Andresen Avatar
December 19, 2013 at 11:56 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem Charmaine in: Relate your poem to one of these quotes, Contest - Sponsored by: Giorgio V. - Nice to participate - and enjoyable to read ALL winning poems! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Oyewole Avatar
December 19, 2013 at 10:15 AM
Congrats Charm!
Peterson Avatar
December 18, 2013 at 12:39 AM
This is utterly transfixing, mesmerizing poetry, and I enjoyed every word. Sorry I can't respond thematically--touching any part would detract from the whole.
Boskovski Avatar
December 17, 2013 at 4:59 PM
Beautiful poem Charma! I enjoyed it very much, my heart is warmed to such a beautiful poem as this. I love the title as well, very clever! I love it! :) great write my dear! :) Well done. Hugs and kisses all around for you my dear! :) xoxoxo
Andresen Avatar
December 17, 2013 at 11:58 AM
- Beautiful poem from you, Charmaine ! - All the best to you - I wish you a beautiful and peaceful Christmas! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Chircop Avatar
December 17, 2013 at 8:39 AM
Tnks for all your kind comments dear friends..
Williams Avatar
December 17, 2013 at 8:37 AM
Charma this is an outstanding piece of work and I particularly love the way you adapted this from another poetry form, that is the sign of true talent, well done…David
Dietrich Avatar
December 17, 2013 at 7:43 AM
wowowow. one of your BEST, Charma. GEtting inspired by your former beautiful haiku AND the quotes to produce this gem. FAVE
Dietrich Avatar
December 17, 2013 at 7:43 AM
and thanks , sweetie, for your several comments on my recent poetry.
Onclaud Avatar
December 17, 2013 at 7:40 AM
bewitched, totally.. this is a gem, charms; wow!... huggs
Manassian Avatar
December 16, 2013 at 3:19 PM
WOW! This is lovely, my dear. You read this so beautiful on Drake's show....So enchanting..........Good luck on contest........Slow dance.......YES! Hugs
Chircop Avatar
December 17, 2013 at 8:41 AM
Eileen i answered in Ruben s box by mistake..sorry : )
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