M. L. Kiser Poet Tanka

Magnificent Stars

magnificent stars,
love to draw constellations
cosmic formations
regale us with their stories-
imagination’s fuel


8-27-19
Writing Challenge 3, August 2019- Five Lines- Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Dear Heart - Wiishkobi Ode

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Caren Krutsinger September 10, 2019 at 11:30 PM Congratulations on your well-deserved win my friend! M. L. Kiser September 11, 2019 at 1:59 PM Thanks

Constance La France August 31, 2019 at 10:18 PM ML, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this great Tanka ~ M. L. Kiser September 6, 2019 at 5:44 AM Thank you so much.

Connie Marcum Wong August 30, 2019 at 11:51 PM This is really lovely M.L. This is a first place for me. Congratulations on your win! xxoo M. L. Kiser August 31, 2019 at 9:23 PM Thank so much, I appreciate the complement.

Anne-Lise Andresen August 29, 2019 at 4:03 AM - If I could ... I'd put this a little higher on the winning list, M.L.   - Congratulations on your beautiful poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) M. L. Kiser August 31, 2019 at 9:24 PM Thank you very much.

Connie Marcum Wong August 27, 2019 at 5:41 PM Talk about magnificent! Your poem shoots this tanka towards the stars M.L.! I loved this gorgeous entry! I hope to see it at the top! xxoo M. L. Kiser August 28, 2019 at 8:30 PM Oh wow, thank you Connie!

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri August 27, 2019 at 2:03 PM And you regaled up poetic senses with this stellar brilliant poem in brevity. Kudos for this shining poetic wonder! And best wishes, M. L. Kiser August 27, 2019 at 3:16 PM Thanks so much.

Chris Green August 27, 2019 at 12:39 PM Absolutely beautiful. Your lines about the night sky invoke visions and the true mystery waiting above once evening arrives. Best wishes in the contest M. L. Kiser August 27, 2019 at 3:16 PM Thank you.

Vijay Pandit August 27, 2019 at 7:17 AM I loved the write, MLK..beautifully described. M. L. Kiser August 27, 2019 at 3:16 PM I am glad, thank you.