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Magnificent Stars

magnificent stars,
love to draw constellations
cosmic formations
regale us with their stories-
imagination’s fuel


8-27-19
Writing Challenge 3, August 2019- Five Lines- Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Dear Heart - Wiishkobi Ode

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Caren Krutsinger Date: 9/10/2019 11:30:00 PM Congratulations on your well-deserved win my friend! Login to Reply M. L. Kiser Date: 9/11/2019 1:59:00 PM Thanks

Constance La France Date: 8/31/2019 10:18:00 PM ML, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this great Tanka ~ Login to Reply M. L. Kiser Date: 9/6/2019 5:44:00 AM Thank you so much.

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 8/30/2019 11:51:00 PM This is really lovely M.L. This is a first place for me. Congratulations on your win! xxoo Login to Reply M. L. Kiser Date: 8/31/2019 9:23:00 PM Thank so much, I appreciate the complement.

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/29/2019 4:03:00 AM - If I could ... I'd put this a little higher on the winning list, M.L.   - Congratulations on your beautiful poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply M. L. Kiser Date: 8/31/2019 9:24:00 PM Thank you very much.

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 8/27/2019 5:41:00 PM Talk about magnificent! Your poem shoots this tanka towards the stars M.L.! I loved this gorgeous entry! I hope to see it at the top! xxoo Login to Reply M. L. Kiser Date: 8/28/2019 8:30:00 PM Oh wow, thank you Connie!

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri Date: 8/27/2019 2:03:00 PM And you regaled up poetic senses with this stellar brilliant poem in brevity. Kudos for this shining poetic wonder! And best wishes, Login to Reply M. L. Kiser Date: 8/27/2019 3:16:00 PM Thanks so much.

Chris Green Date: 8/27/2019 12:39:00 PM Absolutely beautiful. Your lines about the night sky invoke visions and the true mystery waiting above once evening arrives. Best wishes in the contest Login to Reply M. L. Kiser Date: 8/27/2019 3:16:00 PM Thank you.

Vijay Pandit Date: 8/27/2019 7:17:00 AM I loved the write, MLK..beautifully described. Login to Reply M. L. Kiser Date: 8/27/2019 3:16:00 PM I am glad, thank you.