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Written on November 22, 2023

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close up, beneath the microscope, faint veins design subtle roadmaps following the paths and streets, lanes leading over peaks, reflecting lovely stardust, broken fragments close up, beneath the microscope, gentling flames in yesterday’s maze, beyond what the microscope sees a labyrinth much like a dream fading, silent under the light close up, beneath the microscope, revealing trails who are lasting… trails traveled by hearts who believe. not seeing, meekly trusting Him, who blesses souls with everlasting close up, beneath the microscope.

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Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 11/22/2023 3:12:00 PM

an outstanding Quatern, Regina. Did you write this one for a contest (Magnification?) I think it's a great contender. How differently everything in life looks differently when magnified by one's own metaphorical eyes. This is an inspirational and spiritual poem that touched my soul. I appreciate your creativity. You've been blessed...have a great Thanksgiving, Sara

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 11/22/2023 10:25:00 AM

I love this my friend. Such a profound message. What may seem like just a simple thing from a distance, close up, under a microscope can become a roadmap to life. Have a blessed day my friend.