Magnesium Love of the Write

Does it shimmer with confusion? Quake with conclusion Sulfate with the meanings residue confound and astound you? Does it rake and equivocate Does it boil down and resonate Does it shake your foundation and destroy your condemnation? If so your getting it right

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Robert Nehls

Date: 6/11/2014 10:29:00 AM

Hello Ingrid. We should definitely be moved by what we write. If it moves us then it is certain to move another. Very good poem.....Robert.

Ingrid Showalter Swift
Date: 6/12/2014 8:50:00 AM

Thank you so much for reading and commenting :) Very glad you liked it Robert

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/14/2013 5:24:00 PM

Loved the internal rhyme. Light & love

Kathryn Collins

Date: 1/14/2013 7:47:00 AM

Dear Ingrid This little one only a poet understands. I am shimmering with confusion right now trying to find sense in the words flying in my head. love, Kathy