Magnesium Love of the Write

Does it shimmer with confusion?
Quake with conclusion
Sulfate with the meanings residue 
confound and astound you?
Does it rake and equivocate
Does it boil down and resonate
Does it shake your foundation and destroy your
condemnation?

If so your getting it right
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Nehls Avatar
June 11, 2014 at 10:29 AM
Hello Ingrid. We should definitely be moved by what we write. If it moves us then it is certain to move another. Very good poem.....Robert.
Showalter Swift Avatar
June 12, 2014 at 8:50 AM
Thank you so much for reading and commenting :) Very glad you liked it Robert
Guzzi Avatar
January 14, 2013 at 5:24 PM
Loved the internal rhyme. Light & love
Collins Avatar
January 14, 2013 at 7:47 AM
Dear Ingrid This little one only a poet understands. I am shimmering with confusion right now trying to find sense in the words flying in my head. love, Kathy
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