Magical Wetlands

magical wetlands with nothing hidden from view ~ opacity-blue

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 10/28/2020 5:13:00 AM

Sweet imagery.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 10/26/2020 8:58:00 AM

Hi Gershon - nice one 'Opacity blue' makes it really top notch! Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/26/2020 8:04:00 AM

Hi Gershon, This is lovely. Well done:-) Alexis

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 10/26/2020 6:19:00 AM

I like the opacity line too gw. Nicely done haiku. :) Linda

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/26/2020 2:10:00 PM

I hope that at least the meaning was clear, Linda! Sweetness and Light, Gershon

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 10/25/2020 7:51:00 PM

Lovely last line!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/26/2020 2:03:00 PM

Thank you, Michelle! (Hope it's not my 'last line ever!' lol.) Smiles, gw