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Magical Sun


Magical Sun


Shadows cast by Sun

Stretch out long in morning glow

From the grand giraffe

To the smallest lowly ant

Sun embraces, kisses all.


January 2, 2015

naturerelationshipsuntanka

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Andrea Dietrich

January 3, 2015 at 8:22 PM

you are so right , what you said to me below . OFTEN , in fact, less is better!!

M. L. Kiser

January 3, 2015 at 3:10 PM

So true and a wonderful visual, comes from this poem.

Sandra Haight

January 3, 2015 at 5:30 PM

Thank you so much, M. L. I appreciate your nice comment. Sandra

Sara Kendrick

January 3, 2015 at 6:17 AM

Strong poetic quality work..I am glad that I chose this one to read today Thanks for stopping by. Sara

Sandra Haight

January 3, 2015 at 5:30 PM

Thank you so much, Sara. Hugs, Sandra

Tim Smith

January 2, 2015 at 9:31 PM

Excellent Tanka Sandra........ Hugs Tim

Sandra Haight

January 3, 2015 at 5:31 PM

Thank you so much, Tim. I appreciate your stopping by with your positive comment. Hugs, Sandra

Kayod5 Kayode

January 2, 2015 at 8:44 PM

Fantastic Sandra,this a great one, goodluck in the contest...huggs

Sandra Haight

January 3, 2015 at 5:32 PM

Hi Kayod5, thank you so much for your nice comment and wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra

Dorian Petersen Potter

January 2, 2015 at 8:20 PM

Excellent pen Sandra ! I really enjoyed your very nice piece dear friend . I wish you and your family a very Happy New Year and your family! Have a great day! :) Love and hugs! xxx D."

Sandra Haight

January 3, 2015 at 5:38 PM

Thank you so much, Dorian. I appreciate your kind words. I wish you and yours best wishes for the new your. Hugs, Sandra

Andrea Dietrich

January 2, 2015 at 8:20 PM

wow, you thought up a really creative way to do this challenge. I commend you. This is one I want to try. Wish I had thought up your tanka idea first!!!

Sandra Haight

January 3, 2015 at 5:34 PM

Thanks, Andrea. I started with a different, longer form, but ended up with the Tanka. Sometimes less is more for certain subjects! Hugs, Sandra