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Urban Sonnet
Invented by:  Laura Loo. Sonnet form, with 10 syllables per line and a rhyme scheme of: ABABBB- CDCDDD- EFEFFF-GG  

     

Close your eyes, let dreams dissolve doubts and fears, morph into a mighty eagle, and fly away from broken promises and tears. And allow sleep to lift your spirit high; for in the realm of dreams, an open sky holds endless possibilities to try. Take a ride on a gentle, tranquil breeze, and reserve this enchanted time for play; be a thistle tuft, float above the trees. Don't let reality stand in your way swim the Milky Way, star in a ballet, or cruise down Fantasy's superhighway. Fly to where all of your wishes come true; a private place where worry does not rule and you're free to be anyone but you. Shuck the dead weight of shame and ridicule; let dreams mold you into a king or fool, imagination is the perfect tool. Dreams are portals to magical places, the sandman creates and then erases.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 10/20/2018 2:36:00 AM
Finely writ
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Emile Pinet
Date: 10/20/2018 9:23:00 AM
Thanks JP, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/24/2018 10:32:00 PM
Love your poem, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 9/25/2018 8:42:00 AM
Thank you Line, your comments are most welcome my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/22/2018 2:06:00 AM
We would indeed be sad souls without sleepy dreams and reverie, Emile. A fine piece, well done. Regards, Viv
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