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Urban Sonnet
Invented by:  Laura Loo. Sonnet form, with 10 syllables per line and a rhyme scheme of: ABABBB- CDCDDD- EFEFFF-GG

If you should notice any spelling or grammatical errors...PLEASE...point them out to me, as I am compiling these poems for my new book. Thank you, Emile.

Close your eyes and dissolve away the years morph into a fledgling eagle, and fly escaping your inhibitions and fears. Lift yourself off the ground and soar on high, for in the realm of dreams, there's open sky and endless scenarios you can try. Be a whirlwind, or a soft tranquil breeze this enchanted time’s set aside for play, float like a thistle tuft or shake the trees. There is nothing here to stand in your way dance the night away, star in a ballet or cruise down fantasy's superhighway. Go to where all of your wishes come true a place where reality doesn't rule and feel free to be anyone but you. Shuck the shackles of shame and ridicule transform yourself into a brazen fool, your imagination's the perfect tool Sleep's a portal to magical places your memory creates, and then eases. (Urban Sonnet) Sept.21, 2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 10/20/2018 2:36:00 AM
Finely writ
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Emile Pinet
Date: 10/20/2018 9:23:00 AM
Thanks JP, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/24/2018 10:32:00 PM
Love your poem, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 9/25/2018 8:42:00 AM
Thank you Line, your comments are most welcome my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/22/2018 9:46:00 AM
Thanks Viv, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
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Date: 9/22/2018 2:06:00 AM
We would indeed be sad souls without sleepy dreams and reverie, Emile. A fine piece, well done. Regards, Viv
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