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With a step and a stumble and a kick of the heels, My mind launches from the peak of the hill, And I fly high through the clouds, without any wings, With no idea, no plan and no skill, Still my mind is relaxed, a paper boat that’s afloat, Gently floating away down the stream, Reflecting the shades of the fairies at night, Reflecting the beautiful dream, Of mushrooms lit bright with the light of the night, By the tint that comes from the moon, And they sway and dance with the magical folks, Who create the colourful tune, With a step I am swept away from this world, Away to a place far and deep, Every night when I lay to leave this cruel world, And dream through the night in my sleep.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 2/2/2018 8:55:00 PM
Beautiful poem! Wonderful escape. Thanks.
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Date: 1/29/2018 10:05:00 AM
Ahhhhh ... loved the imagery in this Lewis. And as always ... your poems have wonderful flow. ~Judy
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Date: 1/29/2018 4:53:00 PM
Thanks Judy, i can only imagine the crazy magic dreams you have :)
Date: 1/28/2018 9:52:00 PM
I enjoyed reading this poem riding on imagination..mind engaged in magic..seeking to escape. Well written Lewis.
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Date: 1/28/2018 9:56:00 PM
thanks Vijay, glad u enjoyed this
Date: 1/28/2018 7:30:00 PM
An awesome write Lewis full of enchanting imagery and lovely rhythm and rhymes. I love my dream world and I look forward to my adventures every night. I especially love dreams where I fly as well. Love your poem! Warmest wishes and sweetest dreams!! ~Susan
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Date: 1/28/2018 8:41:00 PM
Thank you Susan, i love dreams at every chance too. :)

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