Nette Onclaud Poet Ekphrasis

Magical Broadway

MAGICAL BROADWAY
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my soul is a stage where spotlights breathe
in an ambush of dance and chorale bubbling heat,
like stardust opening lungs and limbs on dramatic scripts,
a night draped in flights of illumined scenes, somewhere…
i am sucked, deranged, chained in a spin of tears and whips





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 for Brian Strand’s  EKPHRASIS…

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart June 3, 2011 at 3:07 PM Congrats Nette on your spectacular win in Brian's contest with these fabulous words my friend..enjoy luv..

Gautami Phookan June 3, 2011 at 12:13 PM Congrats nette on your fabulous win in the ekphrasis contest with this sheer excellence..love and huggs, gautami

Carol Sunshine Brown June 3, 2011 at 5:38 AM Congratulations on your win in Brian Strand's contest Nette. Love, Carol

Gautami Phookan May 29, 2011 at 1:00 PM What a brilliant depiction of life on stage!Winning wishes to you nette for this beautifully versed ekphrasis...

Iolanda Scripca May 28, 2011 at 1:27 AM We all are souls on the stage of ife. I think poets are soul mates and you are mine...with an ambush of dance and chorale bubbling heat....beautiful EKPHRASIS you created here, dear Nette!!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 27, 2011 at 2:22 PM u had me at first line Nette.. magnificent piece.. good luck in the contest dear friend.. taking a dip in cool ocean water just for u luv.. oh..the rush..

Robert A. Dufresne May 27, 2011 at 11:47 AM quite the verbally choreographed poem, Nette! Cool! .. (breath or breathe?)

Jun-Jun Villanueva May 26, 2011 at 7:48 PM great! so speechless after i read this wonderful masterpiece! godbless

Sarah Seraphin May 26, 2011 at 4:15 PM * “Just As A Moment Ago's * Speaking of Lovely to Beautiful Dawn. * I Find Myself Repeating The Very Same Endearments Moment * With Your Radiant Beauty * Beautiful Nette. * Except The Word Isn't Lovely * Tis Memerizing. * You Are Sooo Beautiful * Your Poetry Is A Testament Unto This Amazing Truth * Smile * You Are A Joy to Behold. * A Fave By A Poetess Extreme. * Hugs & Kissses * Kissses & Hugs * Always & Forever * With Lips of Luv. * Sarah” *

Andrea Dietrich May 26, 2011 at 2:00 PM and it's a very dramatic write as well as ABOUT drama! I'm sure he will love this!

Carolyn Devonshire May 26, 2011 at 11:45 AM Fabulous write on the excitement of watching Broadway shows, Nette! Brian is sure to love it as much as I do and I'm wishing you success. Tomorrow night I leave for a fishing vacation and will be away for a week. Have a great time while I'm away. Love, Carolyn

Mohammad Yamin May 26, 2011 at 10:56 AM Hi Nette! What an elegant piece of poetry -awe inspiring. I am encouraged to read more of your work. -Mohammad

Cory Long May 26, 2011 at 10:33 AM this is great nice job.. Thanks for stopping by..cory

Kash Poet May 26, 2011 at 10:31 AM Ma pilipina you are a genious........:)