Magic Star

You're the angel dust 
sparkling silver stars wishing away
Sprinkling magic in misted gems 
dazzling pure trails 

White as the driven snow 
falling within a beauties vision 
Rising wishes blowing whispers 
upon a breeze silently touching 

Smiling golden gleams ivory
candy to one's eyes colors rainbows
Chocolate sleeping warm melting
tender soft satin feelings

Sweet velvet talking honey
sunshine emotions, beam rays 
Golden dew of a rose drop
upon sunflower petals smile 

Regal in light of day 
I pray in darkness of night 
you sleep well watched over by angels 
Held in the warm light of love
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Petersen Potter Avatar
December 3, 2014 at 7:53 PM
Awesome! This poem is so very beautiful Liam! One of the most well-versed ones to me that you've penned so far and I just love all yours, some more than othres of course. And for sure I feel all the true love magic of it. Just wonderful! This one as a matter of fact go to be with all the others on my very favorite Top list of all you've written and posted here at the soup. A 7 +++! Thank you for writing and posting this one.Have a very wonderful and peaceful day Liam, my dearest friend. :) Love and hugs! xoxxxox D.
Mcdaid Avatar
December 5, 2014 at 8:37 PM
truly outstanding comment dorian thank ever so kindly smiling heartfelt appreciated bless you dear friend
Andresen Avatar
December 3, 2014 at 4:27 AM
- Time flies .... many poems I have not read ..... - But, really glad I stopped by this magic poem - A truly beautiful poem .... I feel the love, safe and warm - thank my friend Liam ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Mcdaid Avatar
December 5, 2014 at 8:34 PM
truly dazzling very beautiful comment anne lise still working on the christmas poem with gary heartfelt warm beautiful bless you pal have a great weekend
Allison Avatar
December 2, 2014 at 5:52 PM
incredible pen straight 7 from me - amazing imagery so so beautifully penned:-) hugs jan xxx
Mcdaid Avatar
December 5, 2014 at 8:27 PM
thank you so very kindly jan wonderful comment dear friend bless you
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 2, 2014 at 11:10 AM
A really beautiful poem Liam. I find this one of your best. 7+fav.
Mcdaid Avatar
December 5, 2014 at 8:13 PM
ahh thats so sweet brenda thank you so kindly bless you
Manassian Avatar
December 2, 2014 at 8:49 AM
Chocolate, honey, and angels...it doesn't get sweeter. Hugs
Mcdaid Avatar
December 5, 2014 at 8:11 PM
smiling heartfelt beautiful comment eileen bless you dear pal
Trifiatis Avatar
December 2, 2014 at 7:51 AM
Pure magic your poem my friend, Liam! Outstanding!
Mcdaid Avatar
December 5, 2014 at 7:44 PM
thank you so much demetrios means the world dear friend bless you for the dazzling beautiful comment pal
Chircop Avatar
December 2, 2014 at 7:47 AM
Liam ..This is one of your most beautiful poems,awesome.To my favs.
Mcdaid Avatar
December 5, 2014 at 7:40 PM
smiling charmaine thank you deeply pal for the very beautiful comment heartfelt appreciated bless you
Hamilton Avatar
December 2, 2014 at 7:42 AM
very poignant dear Liam hugs
Mcdaid Avatar
December 5, 2014 at 7:38 PM
linda thank you dear friend bless you pal smiling
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