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Magic star

You're the angel dust 
sparkling silver stars wishing away
Sprinkling magic in misted gems 
dazzling pure trails 

White as the driven snow 
falling within a beauties vision 
Rising wishes blowing whispers 
upon a breeze silently touching 

Smiling golden gleams ivory
candy to one's eyes colors rainbows
Chocolate sleeping warm melting
tender soft satin feelings

Sweet velvet talking honey
sunshine emotions, beam rays 
Golden dew of a rose drop
upon sunflower petals smile 

Regal in light of day 
I pray in darkness of night 
you sleep well watched over by angels 
Held in the warm light of love

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 12/3/2014 7:53:00 PM
Awesome! This poem is so very beautiful Liam! One of the most well-versed ones to me that you've penned so far and I just love all yours, some more than othres of course. And for sure I feel all the true love magic of it. Just wonderful! This one as a matter of fact go to be with all the others on my very favorite Top list of all you've written and posted here at the soup. A 7 +++! Thank you for writing and posting this one.Have a very wonderful and peaceful day Liam, my dearest friend. :) Love and hugs! xoxxxox D.
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liam mcdaid
Date: 12/5/2014 8:37:00 PM
truly outstanding comment dorian thank ever so kindly smiling heartfelt appreciated bless you dear friend
Date: 12/3/2014 4:27:00 AM
- Time flies .... many poems I have not read ..... - But, really glad I stopped by this magic poem - A truly beautiful poem .... I feel the love, safe and warm - thank my friend Liam ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/5/2014 8:34:00 PM
truly dazzling very beautiful comment anne lise still working on the christmas poem with gary heartfelt warm beautiful bless you pal have a great weekend
Date: 12/2/2014 5:52:00 PM
incredible pen straight 7 from me - amazing imagery so so beautifully penned:-) hugs jan xxx
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Date: 12/5/2014 8:27:00 PM
thank you so very kindly jan wonderful comment dear friend bless you
Date: 12/2/2014 11:10:00 AM
A really beautiful poem Liam. I find this one of your best. 7+fav.
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Date: 12/5/2014 8:13:00 PM
ahh thats so sweet brenda thank you so kindly bless you
Date: 12/2/2014 8:49:00 AM
Chocolate, honey, and angels...it doesn't get sweeter. Hugs
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Date: 12/5/2014 8:11:00 PM
smiling heartfelt beautiful comment eileen bless you dear pal
Date: 12/2/2014 7:51:00 AM
Pure magic your poem my friend, Liam! Outstanding!
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Date: 12/5/2014 7:44:00 PM
thank you so much demetrios means the world dear friend bless you for the dazzling beautiful comment pal
Date: 12/2/2014 7:47:00 AM
Liam ..This is one of your most beautiful poems,awesome.To my favs.
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Date: 12/5/2014 7:40:00 PM
smiling charmaine thank you deeply pal for the very beautiful comment heartfelt appreciated bless you
Date: 12/2/2014 7:42:00 AM
very poignant dear Liam hugs
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Date: 12/5/2014 7:38:00 PM
linda thank you dear friend bless you pal smiling