Liam Mcdaid Poet Free verse

Magic Genie of Love

You own me love
most beautiful flowering
blossoming woman inside
this world
to be your genie
popping out
of a bottle

Rubbing me up
out of the heart
in a magic
dazzling puff
of magic smoke
granting three wishes
warm happiness smiles

Appears
you be 
the masterful 
one sweetheart
awaiting your commands
to be all
your feelings
and wishes baby
wrapped up softly

Inside emotions 
desiring dreams
joins sweetly
in no time
over space
star sparkling jewels
almost heavenly breathing

Whispers in 
a cool warm
gentle breeze
and the next thing
you know whats coming
next one treasure
I am all yours honey

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Timothy Hicks October 17, 2014 at 1:05 AM ... now if only you could wish for more wishes! This was a nice fun read. I loved reading Aladdin and the Magic Lamp as a kid and the theme of the Genie gives me nostalgia. Well penned! Liam Mcdaid October 17, 2014 at 2:12 AM thank you so much timothy i used to read them books myself as a child wonderful comment heartfelt appreciated

Andrea Dietrich October 16, 2014 at 9:56 PM So romantic, and soft and sweet!! Liam Mcdaid October 16, 2014 at 10:08 PM thank you andrea wonderful comment dear friend heartwarming deeply appreciated smiling

Charmaine Chircop October 16, 2014 at 9:20 AM U'd lovea genie in a bottle.I'll use the three wushes wisely.Two for me and one of them.to set him free. Liam Mcdaid October 16, 2014 at 3:46 PM thank you sweetly charmaine truly very beautiful comment smiling must put the cork back on for the last wish lol bless you dear friend

Joseph May October 16, 2014 at 7:16 AM Wonderful write.....my favorite genie was Barbara Eden....Thanks for stopping by Liam Mcdaid October 16, 2014 at 7:46 AM smiling thank you joseph wonderful comment deeply appreciated god bless

Eileen Manassian October 16, 2014 at 5:58 AM Oh...to have a genie would be so sweet. Life is hard at times...Your writes always take me to a place where all is filled with beauty and light. Thank you, Liam. Liam Mcdaid October 16, 2014 at 6:10 AM light is the only true beauty that colors eileen brightens our well being warms the insides wonderful comment dear friend thank you kindly bless you pal

Jan Allison October 16, 2014 at 5:11 AM I adore a track called genie in a bottle by Christina Aguilera - the title of your poem drew me in and I loved the romantic write Liam:-) Hugs jan xxx Liam Mcdaid October 16, 2014 at 6:06 AM thank you jan kindly this i wrote 6 weeks back dear friend missing someone wishing on that dream wonderful comment bless you