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Magic Genie of Love

You own me love
most beautiful flowering
blossoming woman inside
this world
to be your genie
popping out
of a bottle

Rubbing me up
out of the heart
in a magic
dazzling puff
of magic smoke
granting three wishes
warm happiness smiles

Appears
you be 
the masterful 
one sweetheart
awaiting your commands
to be all
your feelings
and wishes baby
wrapped up softly

Inside emotions 
desiring dreams
joins sweetly
in no time
over space
star sparkling jewels
almost heavenly breathing

Whispers in 
a cool warm
gentle breeze
and the next thing
you know whats coming
next one treasure
I am all yours honey

Copyright © Liam Mcdaid | Year Posted 2014

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Timothy Hicks Date: 10/17/2014 1:05:00 AM ... now if only you could wish for more wishes! This was a nice fun read. I loved reading Aladdin and the Magic Lamp as a kid and the theme of the Genie gives me nostalgia. Well penned! Login to Reply Liam Mcdaid Date: 10/17/2014 2:12:00 AM thank you so much timothy i used to read them books myself as a child wonderful comment heartfelt appreciated

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/16/2014 9:56:00 PM So romantic, and soft and sweet!! Login to Reply Liam Mcdaid Date: 10/16/2014 10:08:00 PM thank you andrea wonderful comment dear friend heartwarming deeply appreciated smiling

Charmaine Chircop Date: 10/16/2014 9:20:00 AM U'd lovea genie in a bottle.I'll use the three wushes wisely.Two for me and one of them.to set him free. Login to Reply Liam Mcdaid Date: 10/16/2014 3:46:00 PM thank you sweetly charmaine truly very beautiful comment smiling must put the cork back on for the last wish lol bless you dear friend

Joseph May Date: 10/16/2014 7:16:00 AM Wonderful write.....my favorite genie was Barbara Eden....Thanks for stopping by Login to Reply Liam Mcdaid Date: 10/16/2014 7:46:00 AM smiling thank you joseph wonderful comment deeply appreciated god bless

Eileen Manassian Date: 10/16/2014 5:58:00 AM Oh...to have a genie would be so sweet. Life is hard at times...Your writes always take me to a place where all is filled with beauty and light. Thank you, Liam. Login to Reply Liam Mcdaid Date: 10/16/2014 6:10:00 AM light is the only true beauty that colors eileen brightens our well being warms the insides wonderful comment dear friend thank you kindly bless you pal

Jan Allison Date: 10/16/2014 5:11:00 AM I adore a track called genie in a bottle by Christina Aguilera - the title of your poem drew me in and I loved the romantic write Liam:-) Hugs jan xxx Login to Reply Liam Mcdaid Date: 10/16/2014 6:06:00 AM thank you jan kindly this i wrote 6 weeks back dear friend missing someone wishing on that dream wonderful comment bless you