Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Poet Light Verse

Magic Carpet Ride

~Magic Carpet Ride~
The carpet is small and not very wide
Whom do I choose to take on my ride?
The frills are vibrating ready to lift off
My passengers not here but please do not scoff.
Who could it be with that I skim up in the sky?
Riding the magic carpet together we can fly
Hitting the thermals flying through clouds
I’m waiting to start, who do I choose from the crowd?
My carpet is clean its sweet smelling too
Who wants to come with me - please let it be you…
I cannot choose just one for my magic carpet ride
So I better turn off the magic and put it back inside.
I fell off...

© 31/07/2012~GG~

Entry for Magic Carpet ride contest sponsored by Skats

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Apoorva Patrikar September 7, 2012 at 10:35 AM coool! totally worth the win! amazing stuff!

Carol Sunshine Brown September 5, 2012 at 6:42 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win in SKAT's "Magic Carpet Ride" contest GG. Love, Carol

Skat A September 4, 2012 at 6:23 PM MANDY , A LATE CONGRATS WITH MY MAGIC CARPET RIDE CONTEST... CHEERS.. SKAT

Tanya Harrington September 4, 2012 at 12:34 PM Haha! Oh Mandy, love it! Congrats. :) Tanya

Poet Destroyer A September 1, 2012 at 12:51 PM MANDY, a very nice lovely entry... much enjoyed your win,, always~PD

Joy Wellington September 1, 2012 at 12:08 PM Mandy you had me on the edge of my seat waiting to see who was going on that magical ride with you...no one? nicely written my friend. Congrats. One love. Joy Wells

Joseph May September 1, 2012 at 9:12 AM congrats on a great win Mandy

Harry Horsman August 31, 2012 at 2:53 PM congrats Mandy love this, first time seen. Mandy Tams The Golden Girl September 1, 2012 at 6:19 AM Should have asked you harry could have been fun ha ha xx

Olusegun Arowolo August 31, 2012 at 2:12 PM Wonderful piece and nice presentation,Mandy...Great write..Congrats on your win..Jolly ride Lady..

Joseph May August 5, 2012 at 9:08 AM lovely write Mandy..all the best...love Joseph

Andrea Dietrich August 1, 2012 at 4:38 PM Cool way to not have to SAY who you are taking with you!! Sure to please the judge, Mandy!!!

Sara Kendrick August 1, 2012 at 10:47 AM This one reads like a dream ride to me..Good luck in the contest..I see it as one in the winners' list..Thanks for stopping by with congrats..Soup mail soon..Sara

David Williams July 31, 2012 at 7:26 AM Mandy I like the humour in this, it is you all over, best of luck...David