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Magic Carpet Ride

~Magic Carpet Ride~ The carpet is small and not very wide Whom do I choose to take on my ride? The frills are vibrating ready to lift off My passengers not here but please do not scoff. Who could it be with that I skim up in the sky? Riding the magic carpet together we can fly Hitting the thermals flying through clouds I’m waiting to start, who do I choose from the crowd? My carpet is clean its sweet smelling too Who wants to come with me - please let it be you… I cannot choose just one for my magic carpet ride So I better turn off the magic and put it back inside.
I fell off... © 31/07/2012~GG~ Entry for Magic Carpet ride contest sponsored by Skats

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Date: 9/7/2012 10:35:00 AM
coool! totally worth the win! amazing stuff!
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Date: 9/5/2012 6:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in SKAT's "Magic Carpet Ride" contest GG. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/4/2012 6:23:00 PM
MANDY , A LATE CONGRATS WITH MY MAGIC CARPET RIDE CONTEST... CHEERS.. SKAT
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Date: 9/4/2012 12:34:00 PM
Haha! Oh Mandy, love it! Congrats. :) Tanya
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Date: 9/1/2012 12:51:00 PM
MANDY, a very nice lovely entry... much enjoyed your win,, always~PD
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Date: 9/1/2012 12:08:00 PM
Mandy you had me on the edge of my seat waiting to see who was going on that magical ride with you...no one? nicely written my friend. Congrats. One love. Joy Wells
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Date: 9/1/2012 9:12:00 AM
congrats on a great win Mandy
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Date: 8/31/2012 2:53:00 PM
congrats Mandy love this, first time seen.
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Date: 9/1/2012 6:19:00 AM
Should have asked you harry could have been fun ha ha xx
Date: 8/31/2012 2:12:00 PM
Wonderful piece and nice presentation,Mandy...Great write..Congrats on your win..Jolly ride Lady..
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Date: 8/5/2012 9:08:00 AM
lovely write Mandy..all the best...love Joseph
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Date: 8/1/2012 4:38:00 PM
Cool way to not have to SAY who you are taking with you!! Sure to please the judge, Mandy!!!
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Date: 8/1/2012 10:47:00 AM
This one reads like a dream ride to me..Good luck in the contest..I see it as one in the winners' list..Thanks for stopping by with congrats..Soup mail soon..Sara
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Date: 7/31/2012 7:26:00 AM
Mandy I like the humour in this, it is you all over, best of luck...David
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