Magic Beans

The haggard white bearded man pressed the beans into my
palm
Firmly folding my hand over them with a Fatherly squeeze
And with a Wizards twinkle in his bloodshot eyes he quietly pleads
"Take my son, to a secluded place of your choosing and listen,
For only in solitude will the beans speak to you,
And once spoken your destiny shall be revealed."

I softly placed the beans into my leather sac, hanging from my neck
And began my trek,to a place only known to me
A placed Ive envisioned since I was three
I was half way down from the mountain top
Sitting in a small cleft within solid rock, Anticipation,
Fear, consumed my thoughts, and there I waited days
And the beans spoke not.

My mental state decayed, my body frame lean
Wasting away for a bunch of beans.
" A lie, " I screamed, " oh what a fool I be,
Believing my destiny within these beans.'
I'm to weak to descend now, my body so frail
I eat the beans as sustenance so I will not fail

It seems days I sleep, I know not how long
I awake in a valley so far from home
Streets are paved in gold, there's fruit on every tree
People pass me by , They all are bowing to me
So confused from my state, perhaps still I dream
Then a maiden takes my hand,
She says, " Come my King"

I'm lead to a castle, stretching to the stars
And inside there's a throne with and emerald sheen
A throng of thousands shout , "Hail to the King",
They place a crown on my head ,
They dance and sing.
The maiden sits next to me, crowned as my Queen,
And this my destiny, from a bunch of beans
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Godwin Avatar
September 4, 2015 at 7:38 PM
This contains the force and impact of your talent, but changed tense throughout, especially in 1st and 4th verse. That's fine if you intended it be so, it just threw me as a reader. 2nd line, last verse, I think you meant "an emerald", not "and". Again, the talent is apparent ... CayCay
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August 29, 2015 at 2:31 AM
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April 5, 2015 at 11:11 PM
Carl, Have yourself a Happy Easter Love LINDA
Belcher Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 7:07 PM
Congratulations on your win Carl!
Kendrick Avatar
February 16, 2015 at 2:09 PM
Cute winning work..You've definitely got the beans..Congrats..Sara
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February 16, 2015 at 12:31 AM
Carl, CONGRATULATIONS! A sweet Magic bean Win*** Love **SKAT
Hamilton Avatar
February 14, 2015 at 12:51 PM
wonderful pen Carl congrats on win hugs 7
Roper Avatar
February 14, 2015 at 12:21 PM
Congratulations on your win and a 7, wonderful story. Blessings and Happy Valentine's Day Eve
Allison Avatar
February 14, 2015 at 10:37 AM
Lovely fantasy write would make a lovely children's story - congrats:-) Hugs jan xx 7 xx
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February 14, 2015 at 2:47 AM
Hello Carl, it's been a long time, I'm enjoying my winning list. Congratulations, on your win. Stop by my latest blog or poem "50 shades of what?" if you'd like. Wishing you a Happy Valentine's Day, thank you for the Magic Beans Poem -Always & Forever- LINDA
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