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Magic Beans

I’d put you in my fairy tale; we’d scale a giant stalk. Heaven would be our journey's end; a treasure trove of love, our gold. But even magic beans would not have force enough to grow your heart. Written 1/7/15 by Andrea Dietrich for the Magic Beans Contest of PD

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/16/2015 7:22:00 PM
Well done, Andrea! The resolution caught me off guard.
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Date: 3/5/2015 4:12:00 AM
Effective! :) Julia
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Date: 2/19/2015 10:22:00 PM
Andrea.. This is a wonderful winning write, congrats!
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Date: 2/16/2015 12:39:00 AM
Andrea, CONGRATULATIONS! A sweet Magic bean Win*** Love **SKAT
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Date: 2/14/2015 7:28:00 PM
Andrea, congratulations on your win with this wonderful poem and thanks for your visit to my poetry, and yes, you are right this memory within my poem, I use over and over again ~~
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Date: 2/14/2015 1:04:00 PM
congrats Andrea a fine win lovely poem hugs
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Date: 2/14/2015 12:09:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Andrea:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/14/2015 9:20:00 AM
Congrts on a fine win Andrea
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Date: 2/14/2015 3:00:00 AM
Hello Andrea, once again, Congratulations, on your win. Stop by my latest blog or poem "50 shades of what?" if you'd like. Wishing you a Happy Valentine's Day -Always & Forever- LINDA
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Date: 2/14/2015 1:35:00 AM
Hi Andrea, Happy Valentine's Day, thank you for the Magic Beans Poem -Always & Forever- LINDA
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Date: 1/29/2015 4:36:00 PM
love this magical write!
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Date: 1/29/2015 3:30:00 PM
Andrea, wonderful written words. Good luck on the contest. Blessings dear friend eve
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Date: 1/19/2015 11:16:00 AM
Your words dramatically transfer their energy to this poem and establish the mood and theme of this piece. Emile.
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Date: 1/18/2015 6:31:00 PM
An unexpected take on this one from you. I guess even magic beans can only do so much. :) Peace. :)
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Date: 1/16/2015 11:21:00 AM
Andrea, wonderfully written poem with an unexpected twist at the end. GL in the contest. Sandra
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Date: 1/15/2015 12:43:00 PM
Nicely done. I like how much you convey in so few words. You also nailed it with the twist at the end. Good luck in the contest!
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Date: 1/14/2015 12:56:00 PM
This is so emphatic, beautiful and lovely... Thanks for the excellent share... Once again, happy and a prosperous 2015!
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Date: 1/14/2015 12:28:00 AM
I thought I'd call by and say hello. Hope the new year is treating you well. Brilliant poem by the way.
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Date: 1/13/2015 12:09:00 PM
Great entry for the magic beans contest, I've read alot of the entries and so far yours is the best I've read in just my opinion, good luck hope you take it with this fine poem, cheri
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Date: 1/12/2015 3:12:00 PM
Love the twist! I was expecting happily ever after, but it is not to be. On a side note after your fairy tale...I met a girl the other day whose name is actually Cinderella!
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Date: 1/11/2015 12:47:00 PM
interesting form. Love the last line - so unexpected. Love, daver
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Date: 1/11/2015 12:18:00 PM
An enchanting sijo, Andrea; you used the right dosage of words to work magic. I would have loved to be in your fairy tale, but then, the last line dampened my enthusiasm:) hugs // paul
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Date: 1/11/2015 9:23:00 AM
smiling rushing up the beanstalk andrea excellent pen dear friend wishing you a blessed sunday pal
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Date: 1/10/2015 8:35:00 AM
Interesting twist! I like your story Andrea.
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Date: 1/10/2015 7:01:00 AM
I was thinking about using The Fairy Tale in mine as well..Cute one..Sometimes it takes more than magic to get that lovely heart that we need..Sara
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