Andrea Dietrich Poet Sijo

Magic Beans

I’d put you in my fairy tale; we’d scale a giant stalk.

Heaven would be our journey's end; a treasure trove of love, our gold.

But even magic beans would not have force enough to grow your heart.


Written 1/7/15 by Andrea Dietrich for the Magic Beans Contest of PD

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Mark Ackerson April 16, 2015 at 7:22 PM Well done, Andrea! The resolution caught me off guard.

Julia Ward March 5, 2015 at 4:12 AM Effective! :) Julia

Skat A February 16, 2015 at 12:39 AM Andrea, CONGRATULATIONS! A sweet Magic bean Win*** Love **SKAT

Constance La France February 14, 2015 at 7:28 PM Andrea, congratulations on your win with this wonderful poem and thanks for your visit to my poetry, and yes, you are right this memory within my poem, I use over and over again ~~

Shadow Hamilton February 14, 2015 at 1:04 PM congrats Andrea a fine win lovely poem hugs

Jan Allison February 14, 2015 at 12:09 PM Dropping back with my congrats Andrea:-) Hugs Jan xx

Joseph May February 14, 2015 at 9:20 AM Congrts on a fine win Andrea

Poet Destroyer A February 14, 2015 at 3:00 AM Hello Andrea, once again, Congratulations, on your win. Stop by my latest blog or poem "50 shades of what?" if you'd like. Wishing you a Happy Valentine's Day -Always & Forever- LINDA

Poet Destroyer A February 14, 2015 at 1:35 AM Hi Andrea, Happy Valentine's Day, thank you for the Magic Beans Poem -Always & Forever- LINDA

Jack Horne January 29, 2015 at 4:36 PM love this magical write!

Eve Roper January 29, 2015 at 3:30 PM Andrea, wonderful written words. Good luck on the contest. Blessings dear friend eve

Emile Pinet January 19, 2015 at 11:16 AM Your words dramatically transfer their energy to this poem and establish the mood and theme of this piece. Emile.

Robert Johnson January 18, 2015 at 6:31 PM An unexpected take on this one from you. I guess even magic beans can only do so much. :) Peace. :)

Sandra Haight January 16, 2015 at 11:21 AM Andrea, wonderfully written poem with an unexpected twist at the end. GL in the contest. Sandra

Ed Belcher January 15, 2015 at 12:43 PM Nicely done. I like how much you convey in so few words. You also nailed it with the twist at the end. Good luck in the contest!

Funom Makama January 14, 2015 at 12:56 PM This is so emphatic, beautiful and lovely... Thanks for the excellent share... Once again, happy and a prosperous 2015!

Scott Thirtyseven January 14, 2015 at 12:28 AM I thought I'd call by and say hello. Hope the new year is treating you well. Brilliant poem by the way.

Cherl Dunn January 13, 2015 at 12:09 PM Great entry for the magic beans contest, I've read alot of the entries and so far yours is the best I've read in just my opinion, good luck hope you take it with this fine poem, cheri

Monterey Sirak January 12, 2015 at 3:12 PM Love the twist! I was expecting happily ever after, but it is not to be. On a side note after your fairy tale...I met a girl the other day whose name is actually Cinderella!

Daver Austin January 11, 2015 at 12:47 PM interesting form. Love the last line - so unexpected. Love, daver

Paul Callus January 11, 2015 at 12:18 PM An enchanting sijo, Andrea; you used the right dosage of words to work magic. I would have loved to be in your fairy tale, but then, the last line dampened my enthusiasm:) hugs // paul

Liam Mcdaid January 11, 2015 at 9:23 AM smiling rushing up the beanstalk andrea excellent pen dear friend wishing you a blessed sunday pal

Richard Lamoureux January 10, 2015 at 8:35 AM Interesting twist! I like your story Andrea.

Sara Kendrick January 10, 2015 at 7:01 AM I was thinking about using The Fairy Tale in mine as well..Cute one..Sometimes it takes more than magic to get that lovely heart that we need..Sara

Poet Destroyer A January 10, 2015 at 4:52 AM I don't know Andrea..... I decided to stop by this poem. Lucky me.. it's for me:) Soup mail.... :)

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