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Magic Beans

I’d put you in my fairy tale; we’d scale a giant stalk.

Heaven would be our journey's end; a treasure trove of love, our gold.

But even magic beans would not have force enough to grow your heart.


Written 1/7/15 by Andrea Dietrich for the Magic Beans Contest of PD

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Mark Ackerson

Date: 4/16/2015 7:22:00 PM

Well done, Andrea! The resolution caught me off guard.

Julia Ward

Date: 3/5/2015 4:12:00 AM

Effective! :) Julia

Skat A

Date: 2/16/2015 12:39:00 AM

Andrea, CONGRATULATIONS! A sweet Magic bean Win*** Love **SKAT

Constance La France

Date: 2/14/2015 7:28:00 PM

Andrea, congratulations on your win with this wonderful poem and thanks for your visit to my poetry, and yes, you are right this memory within my poem, I use over and over again ~~

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 2/14/2015 1:04:00 PM

congrats Andrea a fine win lovely poem hugs

Jan Allison

Date: 2/14/2015 12:09:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Andrea:-) Hugs Jan xx

Joseph May

Date: 2/14/2015 9:20:00 AM

Congrts on a fine win Andrea

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/14/2015 3:00:00 AM

Hello Andrea, once again, Congratulations, on your win. Stop by my latest blog or poem "50 shades of what?" if you'd like. Wishing you a Happy Valentine's Day -Always & Forever- LINDA

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/14/2015 1:35:00 AM

Hi Andrea, Happy Valentine's Day, thank you for the Magic Beans Poem -Always & Forever- LINDA

Jack Horne

Date: 1/29/2015 4:36:00 PM

love this magical write!

Eve Roper

Date: 1/29/2015 3:30:00 PM

Andrea, wonderful written words. Good luck on the contest. Blessings dear friend eve

Emile Pinet

Date: 1/19/2015 11:16:00 AM

Your words dramatically transfer their energy to this poem and establish the mood and theme of this piece. Emile.

Robert Johnson

Date: 1/18/2015 6:31:00 PM

An unexpected take on this one from you. I guess even magic beans can only do so much. :) Peace. :)

Sandra Haight

Date: 1/16/2015 11:21:00 AM

Andrea, wonderfully written poem with an unexpected twist at the end. GL in the contest. Sandra

Ed Belcher

Date: 1/15/2015 12:43:00 PM

Nicely done. I like how much you convey in so few words. You also nailed it with the twist at the end. Good luck in the contest!

Funom Makama

Date: 1/14/2015 12:56:00 PM

This is so emphatic, beautiful and lovely... Thanks for the excellent share... Once again, happy and a prosperous 2015!

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 1/14/2015 12:28:00 AM

I thought I'd call by and say hello. Hope the new year is treating you well. Brilliant poem by the way.

Cherl Dunn

Date: 1/13/2015 12:09:00 PM

Great entry for the magic beans contest, I've read alot of the entries and so far yours is the best I've read in just my opinion, good luck hope you take it with this fine poem, cheri

Monterey Sirak

Date: 1/12/2015 3:12:00 PM

Love the twist! I was expecting happily ever after, but it is not to be. On a side note after your fairy tale...I met a girl the other day whose name is actually Cinderella!

Daver Austin

Date: 1/11/2015 12:47:00 PM

interesting form. Love the last line - so unexpected. Love, daver

Paul Callus

Date: 1/11/2015 12:18:00 PM

An enchanting sijo, Andrea; you used the right dosage of words to work magic. I would have loved to be in your fairy tale, but then, the last line dampened my enthusiasm:) hugs // paul