Magic and Mayhem

tile crackin' suds-n-bubbles baby laughing laughter draining baby straining magic into mayhem

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Suzanne C. Goudreau

Date: 1/11/2012 12:52:00 PM

A lovely inspiring read with awesome imagery...I could nearly hear the baby straining...Most beautifully accomplished. Congratulations on being featured here...well deserved!

Kathryn Collins

Date: 1/10/2012 8:12:00 AM

slipping, sliding towels ahiding love your poem, Kathy

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/9/2012 10:47:00 AM

congratulations on the week`s win Anthony!! :) oxox love from Anne-Lise

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/9/2012 7:49:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Anthony. I wish you the best in 2012 with your writing. Love, Carol

Solo Iq

Date: 9/16/2011 10:01:00 AM

hehe...did you write this after you changed your wet shirt?...and thanxs for the ''s after u tip''....oops

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/12/2011 3:50:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Debbie Guzzi's "Bubbles"contest Lemon. Love,Carol

David Williams

Date: 9/12/2011 3:39:00 PM

hey Lemon congrats on your win..David

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/12/2011 3:33:00 PM

What a cute poem. Brought a smile to my face, Lemon. Congratulations on your success in Deb's contest! Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/12/2011 3:06:00 PM

Enjoyed reading this Bubbles one..Congrats..Sara