Brian Strand Poet Tanka

Magic

this summer morning
sun,highlights the pampas palm
bathing in the heat-
as nature,in siesta
celestial heaven meets

lazy,rests my soul
as contentment's shalom flows
silence has its say-
fleetingly,nothing matters
then,in thankfulness..I pray

Brian Strand Bag of tricks

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Carol Sunshine Brown July 25, 2011 at 10:31 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win in Linda-Marie's "Bag Of Tricks" contest Brian. Love, Carol

Jun-Jun Villanueva July 24, 2011 at 4:43 AM CONGRATULATIONS ! very glad and proud to share the placement with you. . .a great and clever poet blessed with an almost limitless thoughts. . . .*-* junjun

David Williams July 24, 2011 at 4:22 AM hey Brian, well done, congrats, David

Sara Kendrick July 23, 2011 at 8:37 PM Great faith based work..Enjoyed..Congrats on your win..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta July 23, 2011 at 2:10 PM My congratulations on the third place win in the contest of Linda, Brian

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 23, 2011 at 1:59 PM Congrats Brian on your success in my contest and thankxx for your constant support... stunning lines.. thankxx for my HM in your last contest too..

Andrea Dietrich July 23, 2011 at 12:19 PM this really conveys the essence of the title Magic, Brian. It's a very lovely entry to the contest. Congrats on your win.

Elaine George July 13, 2011 at 11:11 PM Absolutely beautiful, Brian. A Tanka Masterpiece. Elaine

Farah Chamma July 10, 2011 at 1:36 AM Every word is where it's supposed to me..lovely write Brian..I've missed reading you..farah

Doris Culverhouse July 6, 2011 at 7:33 AM enjoyed reading today!! prayer calms the savage beast....

Carol Sunshine Brown July 6, 2011 at 7:08 AM I am enjoying reading the very diverse poetry here this morning in my Soupland. Words pouring onto paper from poets souls. What a joy to be able to sit and read such wonderful poetry for awhile today. Have a very good day Brian. Love, Carol

David Williams July 6, 2011 at 4:05 AM hi Brian, very deep and moving good luck in the contest. David