Magic

this summer morning
sun,highlights the pampas palm
bathing in the heat-
as nature,in siesta
celestial heaven meets

lazy,rests my soul
as contentment's shalom flows
silence has its say-
fleetingly,nothing matters
then,in thankfulness..I pray

Brian Strand Bag of tricks

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 7/25/2011 10:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Linda-Marie's "Bag Of Tricks" contest Brian. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/24/2011 4:43:00 AM
CONGRATULATIONS ! very glad and proud to share the placement with you. . .a great and clever poet blessed with an almost limitless thoughts. . . .*-* junjun
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Date: 7/24/2011 4:22:00 AM
hey Brian, well done, congrats, David
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Date: 7/23/2011 8:37:00 PM
Great faith based work..Enjoyed..Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 7/23/2011 2:10:00 PM
My congratulations on the third place win in the contest of Linda, Brian
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Date: 7/23/2011 1:59:00 PM
Congrats Brian on your success in my contest and thankxx for your constant support... stunning lines.. thankxx for my HM in your last contest too..
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Date: 7/23/2011 12:19:00 PM
this really conveys the essence of the title Magic, Brian. It's a very lovely entry to the contest. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 7/13/2011 11:11:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful, Brian. A Tanka Masterpiece. Elaine
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Date: 7/10/2011 1:36:00 AM
Every word is where it's supposed to me..lovely write Brian..I've missed reading you..farah
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Date: 7/6/2011 7:33:00 AM
enjoyed reading today!! prayer calms the savage beast....
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Date: 7/6/2011 7:08:00 AM
I am enjoying reading the very diverse poetry here this morning in my Soupland. Words pouring onto paper from poets souls. What a joy to be able to sit and read such wonderful poetry for awhile today. Have a very good day Brian. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/6/2011 4:05:00 AM
hi Brian, very deep and moving good luck in the contest. David
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