Magic

Her eyes sparkle
  He speaks to her heart

She encircles him, floating on air
  He drinks in her charms, takes her in his arms

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Date: 7/14/2022 9:45:00 AM
So romantic... lovely. Ann
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Date: 7/14/2022 6:33:00 AM
Beautifully written Gershon :)
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Date: 7/13/2022 5:47:00 PM
Wow! Gershon, A magical poem completely captures the feeling of ecstasy between these two lovers. I felt them floating in the air. You expressed this most beautifully, Thank you, Gershon. Take care, Shirley
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/13/2022 7:19:00 PM
Thanks for my favorite comment, i.e., 'Wow!' -- 'cos it's 'Mom' upside down, of course. Really appreciate your enthusiasm for this write, Shirley. Blessings, Gershon
Date: 7/13/2022 4:22:00 PM
This is exquisite
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/13/2022 7:20:00 PM
Can't ask for more than that, Caren. Thank you so much, gw
Date: 7/13/2022 9:26:00 AM
Beautiful, dear poet!
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Date: 7/13/2022 7:27:00 PM
Thank you, dear poetess!
Date: 7/12/2022 10:34:00 PM
She- the treasure of love for him and he- the treasure of love for her~ so let it be fair~
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Date: 7/13/2022 7:29:00 PM
Fair enough, Mahtab. Thank you. :) gw
Date: 7/12/2022 10:31:00 PM
As the final poem I'm reading tonight, this is awesome, Gershon. :) Evelyn
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/13/2022 7:31:00 PM
Hope it didn't put you to sleep too fast, Evelyn. lol. Thanks, gw
Date: 7/12/2022 9:31:00 PM
Love is the magic elixir, I'll drink to that ~ L'chaim!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/13/2022 7:34:00 PM
-- L'Tovim (to all good things) u'l'Shalom (and to Peace!) Bottoms up, Gershon
Date: 7/12/2022 9:27:00 PM
As usual, you saved the best for the last!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/13/2022 7:35:00 PM
Trying my best, Seeker. Thank you!
Date: 7/12/2022 9:15:00 PM
A majical trance for sure Gershon...
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