Magic

Her eyes sparkle
  He speaks to her heart

She encircles him, floating on air
  He drinks in her charms, takes her in his arms
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July 14, 2022 at 9:45 AM
So romantic... lovely. Ann
Sands Avatar
July 14, 2022 at 6:33 AM
Beautifully written Gershon :)
Hawkins Avatar
July 13, 2022 at 5:47 PM
Wow! Gershon, A magical poem completely captures the feeling of ecstasy between these two lovers. I felt them floating in the air. You expressed this most beautifully, Thank you, Gershon. Take care, Shirley
Wolf Avatar
July 13, 2022 at 7:19 PM
Thanks for my favorite comment, i.e., 'Wow!' -- 'cos it's 'Mom' upside down, of course. Really appreciate your enthusiasm for this write, Shirley. Blessings, Gershon
Krutsinger Avatar
July 13, 2022 at 4:22 PM
This is exquisite
Wolf Avatar
July 13, 2022 at 7:20 PM
Can't ask for more than that, Caren. Thank you so much, gw
Rodrigues Avatar
July 13, 2022 at 9:26 AM
Beautiful, dear poet!
Wolf Avatar
July 13, 2022 at 7:27 PM
Thank you, dear poetess!
Bangalee Avatar
July 12, 2022 at 10:34 PM
She- the treasure of love for him and he- the treasure of love for her~ so let it be fair~
Wolf Avatar
July 13, 2022 at 7:29 PM
Fair enough, Mahtab. Thank you. :) gw
Buehler Avatar
July 12, 2022 at 10:31 PM
As the final poem I'm reading tonight, this is awesome, Gershon. :) Evelyn
Wolf Avatar
July 13, 2022 at 7:31 PM
Hope it didn't put you to sleep too fast, Evelyn. lol. Thanks, gw
Watt Avatar
July 12, 2022 at 9:31 PM
Love is the magic elixir, I'll drink to that ~ L'chaim!
Wolf Avatar
July 13, 2022 at 7:34 PM
-- L'Tovim (to all good things) u'l'Shalom (and to Peace!) Bottoms up, Gershon
Seeker Avatar
July 12, 2022 at 9:27 PM
As usual, you saved the best for the last!
Wolf Avatar
July 13, 2022 at 7:35 PM
Trying my best, Seeker. Thank you!
Tor Avatar
July 12, 2022 at 9:15 PM
A majical trance for sure Gershon...
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