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As the early sun rises casting Magenta upon the clouds My heart's cherished enterprise Is to feel the moment and be proud The roosters crow down in the vale Cindy meows close at hand A grayness has settled 'pon the sky Please don't in my heart land Songbirds sing a soft sweet tune They're still close and in demand Do they know that cooler air is near? Does God's plan they understand? They don't worry nor do they fret Each day there are bugs to fill An empty stomach doesn't lack Mankind has other needs so real Mankind needs a relationship Out of this world's busy life A spiritual and emotional filling One not based on human strife The sun shines once again casting its Illumination upon Those dark clouds fluffy charcoal design Wait, release raindrops, move on

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Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 11/2/2021 6:51:00 PM

"Seeking spiritual and emotional filling" says it all.....beautiful and moving. Blessings, Paulette

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 11/1/2021 11:51:00 PM

Man sure does need this "Mankind needs a relationship Out of this world's busy life A spiritual and emotional filling One not based on human strife" You nailed it.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/2/2021 4:22:00 AM

Caren, If only all of mankind could come to a realization of this need and seek it out and let the Light in. Someday it will happen but probably not any time in the near future. Thanks for the kind review. Sara

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/23/2021 11:12:00 AM

What a beautiful story/write. Love your line "Songbirds sing a soft sweet tune." They are taken care of by God. Have a blessed autumn day.................

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/23/2021 1:58:00 PM

Paula, Isn't it wonderful that all of nature is taken care of by God and in his infinite mercy nature goes on year after year. I appreciate your visits. Sara

Joanna Daniel

Date: 10/23/2021 4:50:00 AM

A lovely write, Sara, filled with deep thoughts:)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/23/2021 7:14:00 AM

Jo, Thank you. I know that you completely understand them though. Sara

Deb M

Date: 10/23/2021 1:41:00 AM

Hi Sara….you had me strolling down nature’s path while reading this poem….just lovely. Debx

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/23/2021 7:02:00 AM

Deb, I hope the stroll was relaxing and comfortable. Sara

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 10/23/2021 12:31:00 AM

Very nice ode to nature Sara, lovely to read...Delice

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/23/2021 7:02:00 AM

Thank you, Delice. I am glad you found it lovely. Sara

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 10/21/2021 10:57:00 AM

Great imagery portrayed so poetically wow, loved the mention of birds and the cat. And the last two stanzas end it on such godly positive notes wow!! Faith is so vital yes. Kudos! <<<<<<<<>>>>>>•^^^^^ Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/21/2021 2:17:00 PM

S. Zaynab, Your comment is uplifting and encouraging. Thanks for dropping by. Sara

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 10/20/2021 9:18:00 PM

Hello Sara ... there is few things better than watching the changing colours of dawn with a background of natures chorus to welcome another day - thank you Sara - Lindsay

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/21/2021 3:26:00 AM

Lindsay, I am glad that you enjoyed it. No two days are alike. Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/18/2021 1:32:00 PM

Lovely one rather like a hymn.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/18/2021 2:56:00 PM

Andrea, I am sure with some revisions it could be turned into a hymn of sorts. I feel that it came from the Holy Spirit and not myself. Thanks for your visit. Sara

Eve Roper

Date: 10/18/2021 6:44:00 AM

You have made me feel I am there with the sounds of nature and imagery. Great write. Hugs Eve

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/18/2021 1:18:00 PM

Eve, I am glad that you could feel and hear my poem. Thanks. Sara

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/17/2021 5:42:00 AM

Lovely imagery intertwined with the next to last verse!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/18/2021 1:16:00 PM

Your comments added so much to my day. Thank you. Sara

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/17/2021 1:46:00 AM

All this wonderful poetry, as the sun breaches the horizon, Truly beautiful this is Sara.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/18/2021 8:59:00 AM

Thank you, Harry. I appreciate the kind review. Sara

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/16/2021 10:49:00 PM

Beauty is the mark of this wonderful poem. Loved reading it.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/18/2021 8:43:00 AM

Victor, Thank you for your kind review. Sara

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 10/16/2021 9:18:00 PM

Sara, this is beautiful. You have such a precious heart, your pen flows with such gentleness.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/17/2021 3:15:00 PM

Thank you, BJ. Sometimes I wonder what kind of heart I have been then the Holy Spirit reminds me. Sara

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 10/16/2021 3:13:00 PM

Lovely write and vision. God bless you sweet friend. Love, Gina

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/17/2021 7:03:00 AM

Regina, Your visits always offer some assurance. Thanks. Sara

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 10/16/2021 1:04:00 PM

Again a gentleness that is your signature style and a sense of being present in the here and now, and enjoying its every moment. Hugs and blessings Sara, Jennifer.

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 10/21/2021 3:29:00 AM

i enjoy my visits to your page Sara, such depth of an awesome person is reflected in your every write. Hugs, Jennifer.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/17/2021 5:52:00 AM

Jennifer, Your visits are delightful. I hope you enjoyed the poem as much as I enjoyed writing. Thanks..Sara

Karen Jones

Date: 10/16/2021 7:05:00 AM

This is enchanting I was lost in your poetic clouds right from the beginning. Great poem.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/16/2021 12:29:00 PM

Thanks, Karen. I appreciate the visit. Sara

Constance La France

Date: 10/16/2021 6:17:00 AM

Sara, a lovely poem you have penned for us ~ love and serenity _Constance

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/16/2021 6:33:00 AM

Constance, Thanks for the wish for love and serenity. I need all I can get. Your visit is uplifting. Sara