Premiere Contest WinnerMagdalena Droplets

In the body of the Magdalena 
droplets dance fiery ice
where Power was gained through
entry into the Garden of the Heart
another way then became the forgotten 
Magdalena droplets Powers Heart, not 
                        forgotten —

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Companion Poem to : 
Garden of the Heart : Edited : 2024

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First Placement: July 26
Form : Phoenix Sixain 
Sponsor: Suzette Richards
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Borg Avatar
July 17, 2026 at 1:39 PM
Borg Avatar
July 17, 2026 at 1:41 PM
Illuminating and powerful. Congratulations on your deserved win, Ghairo.
Fowler Avatar
July 17, 2026 at 7:58 AM
Awesome win Ghairo - congrats! :)
Smith  Avatar
July 15, 2026 at 6:30 AM
Congratulations Ghairo well done.
Kitchin Avatar
July 15, 2026 at 3:31 AM
Ghairo, congratulations on your first place trophy win with your beautiful poem.
Daniels Avatar
July 15, 2026 at 3:37 AM
ThkU Tania - was a quickie, so win a surprise : just saw it now & read yours too. Well done to you: as we know, Su is a strict assessor. Have a beautiful day. X.
Richards Avatar
July 15, 2026 at 1:41 AM
Congratulations on your trophy win, Ghairo, with this excellent interpretation of the Phoenix Sixain poetic form - lending your beautiful poem, Garden of Heart, to the composition: Garden of the Heart by Ghairo Daniels | Poemist
Daniels Avatar
July 15, 2026 at 3:33 AM
Aah ! Danke vir plasing, Su. Appreciate your charitable contest time. That poem is uploaded here at Soup, as I edited punctuation. Though I recited a couple of YouTube shorts of it, so will post those links. God’s blessings. Keep warm. Xx
Richards Avatar
July 15, 2026 at 1:49 AM
PS With the poetry search option not functioning at the time of finalising the contest, I had to resort to the internet; hence the link I found. A very thought-provoking poem. Maybe you could add the link to your poem posted here at PoetrySoup under the comments for others to read the full poem?
Daniels Avatar
July 13, 2026 at 12:31 AM
Poet’s Note : This little poem attempts to extract the Magdalena undercurrent of my original poem : Garden of the Heart. Through “fiery ice” it highlights the capacity of truly Divine Feminines to hold the dualistic nature of human evolution as we tread into the Innermost Heart to achieve illumination & wholeness. In my deep contemplation of the Magdalena & on Jesus the Christed, it is highly unlikely that either of them would use vocabulary such as “pretty” to invoke the strength & purpose of inner work ~ though the feminine who was one of the first at HIS tomb subsequent to the Ascension can certainly be referred to as one of the most powerful who have walked Gaia. I am also certain that aspects of her consciousness lives within each soul that has enfleshed in materiality & especially that it empowers the Hearts of all women open to evolution.
Hind Avatar
July 12, 2026 at 11:35 PM
this is pretty, Ghairo :)
Daniels Avatar
July 12, 2026 at 11:42 PM
Actually, I perceive it as powerful, not pretty, as is my version of the Magdalena. ThkU for visiting, PH.
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