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Mafia Critique

The mafia is like a hemorrhoid: -Both absolutely no use -Both put the squeeze on their victim - and both are a pain in the anus!!

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Larry Belt

Date: 8/31/2010 4:40:00 PM

LOL Too funny and indeed too true......Larry

Steven Gadberry

Date: 8/31/2010 11:17:00 AM

Cute and a bit funny. Was expecting something longer, though. Good write. Thanks for your comment on my poem.

Gert W. Knop

Date: 8/31/2010 4:57:00 AM

Hi Doris, enjoyed your funny description of the Mafia! And thank you for your ongoing commenst! Have a great week ahead!....Gert

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/30/2010 1:00:00 PM

Interesting idea for a comparison..Keep the creative pen flowing..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..By the way the above is one of the gifts of pregnancy. ..Sara

Sidney Hall Mad Poet

Date: 8/30/2010 10:58:00 AM

Doris how could you? A hemorrhoid is useful. it tells one what sort of and arsehole one is. As for the mafia I thought that was a sort of burger ;-) . You used Anus i'm telling

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/30/2010 8:21:00 AM

Wow I missed reading a lot of excellent poetry this past weekend. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Hoping you have a wonderful week filled with inspiration Doris. Thank you for your kind comments. Love, Carol

Andreas Akun

Date: 8/29/2010 7:32:00 PM

An instant and sharp metaphor on mafia! Yes, I'm a teacher and this is true here, and thanks for reminding me... Anyway, all walks of life are ironic. I have just started writing down experiences into poems...need to learn a lot still.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/29/2010 7:18:00 PM

Nice picture you created of mafia critique, Doris

Wilma Neels

Date: 8/29/2010 6:45:00 PM

Without a doubt I got your back.. I'll even organise you a decoy hehe

John Freeman

Date: 8/29/2010 6:34:00 PM

Haaaaaaaaa! Amen to that Doris. Thanks for your comments, they are important to me. The limerick contest had some tough competition in it. To make it into the top ten proves your limerick was a good one. Smile. Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/29/2010 6:09:00 PM

So happy both my son and your brother are on their way to recovery Doris.. I believe in the power of prayer and no one can dispute it luv..

Wilma Neels

Date: 8/29/2010 5:36:00 PM

Shh lets hope the mafia don't have agents on the Soup lol Enjoyed your witty write Doris :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/29/2010 4:45:00 PM

And both are quite real Doris... haha.. enjoyed your comparison my friend... watch those names that end in vowels..haha.. Mafia..haha.. funny ..luv it..

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/29/2010 11:42:00 AM

lol, Doris, enjoyed,,he he he! ,..p.d.

Sharon Tideswell

Date: 8/29/2010 11:26:00 AM

Haha, your poem made me laugh out loud Doris, very funny ~ Sharon :)