Mafia Critique

LOL Too funny and indeed too true......Larry

Cute and a bit funny. Was expecting something longer, though. Good write. Thanks for your comment on my poem.

Hi Doris, enjoyed your funny description of the Mafia! And thank you for your ongoing commenst! Have a great week ahead!....Gert

Interesting idea for a comparison..Keep the creative pen flowing..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..By the way the above is one of the gifts of pregnancy. ..Sara

Doris how could you? A hemorrhoid is useful. it tells one what sort of and arsehole one is. As for the mafia I thought that was a sort of burger ;-) . You used Anus i'm telling

Wow I missed reading a lot of excellent poetry this past weekend. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Hoping you have a wonderful week filled with inspiration Doris. Thank you for your kind comments. Love, Carol

An instant and sharp metaphor on mafia! Yes, I'm a teacher and this is true here, and thanks for reminding me... Anyway, all walks of life are ironic. I have just started writing down experiences into poems...need to learn a lot still.

Nice picture you created of mafia critique, Doris

Without a doubt I got your back.. I'll even organise you a decoy hehe

Haaaaaaaaa! Amen to that Doris. Thanks for your comments, they are important to me. The limerick contest had some tough competition in it. To make it into the top ten proves your limerick was a good one. Smile. Agape, Moses

So happy both my son and your brother are on their way to recovery Doris.. I believe in the power of prayer and no one can dispute it luv..

Shh lets hope the mafia don't have agents on the Soup lol Enjoyed your witty write Doris :)

And both are quite real Doris... haha.. enjoyed your comparison my friend... watch those names that end in vowels..haha.. Mafia..haha.. funny ..luv it..

lol, Doris, enjoyed,,he he he! ,..p.d.

Haha, your poem made me laugh out loud Doris, very funny ~ Sharon :)