Maestro's Mistake

The maestro conducting the bands
Could get none to follow commands.
Though skilled and respected,
Sadly, he'd neglected
That morning to put on his pants.

2.7.20
For Tania Kitchin's Limerick contest
Confirmed syllable count 8-8-6-6-8
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Olaoluwa  Avatar
November 15, 2022 at 11:32 AM
Congratulations. More wins...
Radhakrishna Avatar
February 12, 2020 at 1:31 PM
Great! With a wave of his wand, he could not command, because his trousers were resting on land! Congrats:)
Dietrich Avatar
February 11, 2020 at 3:46 PM
this was VERY very good. Congrats. Love this one.
Rowe Avatar
February 11, 2020 at 10:14 PM
Thank you
Gauthier Avatar
February 10, 2020 at 6:38 PM
That was a surprise. Congrats on your win, Jesse.
Rowe Avatar
February 11, 2020 at 10:14 PM
Thank you, Line.
Messina Avatar
February 10, 2020 at 4:47 PM
LOL...Good one, Jesse. Congrats on your win!
Rowe Avatar
February 11, 2020 at 10:15 PM
Thanks.
Kitchin Avatar
February 10, 2020 at 2:34 PM
Jesse, congratulations on your winning placement with your funny limerick!
Rowe Avatar
February 11, 2020 at 10:16 PM
Thank you, Tania. I've always been a sucker for limericks. I remember they were how I was first introduced to poetry back in elementary school. I've always loved how they were just quick, funny stories.
Devonshire Avatar
February 10, 2020 at 1:38 PM
Oooh, wickedly funny! Congratulations on your win, Jesse!
Rowe Avatar
February 11, 2020 at 10:17 PM
Thank you.
Watt Avatar
February 10, 2020 at 1:34 PM
I'll bet he got in trouble with the brass... Congrats Jesse on a fun romp (or should I say rump?) of a limerick ~ John
Rowe Avatar
February 11, 2020 at 10:18 PM
Haha. Thanks, John.
Allison Avatar
February 10, 2020 at 12:12 PM
Got to say this was one of my faves Jesse! Many congratulations on your win :-) Hugs Jan xx
Rowe Avatar
February 11, 2020 at 10:18 PM
Thank you so much.
Canerdy Avatar
February 10, 2020 at 11:23 AM
Oh, my! CONGRATS on your well-deserved win, Jesse! Janice
Rowe Avatar
February 11, 2020 at 10:24 PM
Thank you.
Wolf Avatar
February 8, 2020 at 11:02 PM
Very cute... OK. 'Rip'-roaring!... Sure is a nice surprise to catch your avatar back on the Soup! G.L. in Tania's contest! Best wishes, Gershon
Rowe Avatar
February 11, 2020 at 10:25 PM
Thanks. Good to be back. I'll probably not be back to my previous level for a bit because my work has been sucking up all my free time.
Laurie Avatar
February 7, 2020 at 6:30 PM
G'day Jesse … witty alright. This maestro appears to be either eccentric or a flasher. Thanks Jesse - Lindsay
Rowe Avatar
February 11, 2020 at 10:27 PM
The wonder of poetry is that such distinctions are left to the imagination of the reader.
Awtry Avatar
February 7, 2020 at 12:57 PM
Lol! Nicely done!
Wolf Avatar
February 8, 2020 at 11:04 PM
Sorry to sneak in here, but sure would love to read some your great writes again too, P.S! Cheers, Gershon
Allison Avatar
February 7, 2020 at 12:09 PM
VERY witty!:-) hugs jan xx
Cunningham Avatar
February 7, 2020 at 9:44 AM
Haha, this is a gem, well you can't say he didn't have a conducters stick. Nice to see you back Jesse. Tom
Pigeon Tart Avatar
February 7, 2020 at 9:23 AM
LOL! A winner for sure! Love it Jesse. xomo
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