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Maelstrom

this is a story... of courage and heroism. after agonizing months in captivity, withstanding the churning maelstrom of unspeakable horrors day in, day out; frequently subjected to torture, mockery, psychological warfare, etc, the long-suffering prisoners of war miraculously make a break to freedom. the great escape, however, tasted too bittersweet to celebrate. all but one was accounted for the seemingly impossible had to be done; the intrepid soldiers decide to u-turn back behind enemy lines to rescue one of their own, no matter the cost. fully aware they're embarking on a dangerous mission that will suck them into yet another maelstrom of war: furious exchanges of gunfire - they surge ahead nonetheless they have no misgivings dying by the "Leave No Man Behind" code, they live by. Writing Challenge - M words - Poetry Contest Sponsored by Constance La France Theme/word chosen: Maelstrom Date written: 03/20/2023

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Date: 4/3/2023 4:49:00 AM
Edward, excellent writing and thank you for sharing your poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations ,
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Date: 3/22/2023 4:11:00 AM
Congratulations on your top win , Edward. Wonderful poem
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/22/2023 5:18:00 AM
Thank you so much, Alfonso:-)
Date: 3/21/2023 10:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Edward! You have chosen a theme that illustrates the way courage, commitment and honor lifts up the souls of men and all of mankind! We need continual reminders such as those illustrated in your words. Blessings to you!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/22/2023 5:17:00 AM
Thank you very much for your wonderful feedback and congratulations, Sam:-)
Date: 3/21/2023 9:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a wonderful yet sad write/story. It is true for some. Have a great/blessed day writing away...........
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/22/2023 5:16:00 AM
Thank you very much, Paula:-)
Date: 3/21/2023 9:13:00 AM
- A story we know - which is terribly sad, Edward - Congratulations on your win - hugs
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/22/2023 5:16:00 AM
Thank you so much, Anne-Lise:-)
Date: 3/21/2023 7:29:00 AM
"dying by the "Leave No Man Behind" code, they live by" - A great tribute to the patriots. Congratulations!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/22/2023 5:14:00 AM
Thank you very much, Christuraj:-)
Date: 3/21/2023 7:05:00 AM
Nicely written for the brothers-in-arms Edward. A debt we can never repay. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/22/2023 5:15:00 AM
Thank you very much, Linda:-)
Date: 3/21/2023 7:00:00 AM
Congratulations, A worthy winner. Best wishes.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/22/2023 5:15:00 AM
Thank you very much, Wendy:-)
Date: 3/20/2023 9:32:00 PM
Tears. Knew two men that were Prisoners of war during the Vietnam war. What a terrible experience and to escape and be courageous enough to return for one left behind, unimaginable. A maelstrom of hate and fear and punishment and pain. I feel rigid and numb. This poem has great impact. Spellbinding. Horrendous. I am sorry, although it deserves it, I cant bring myself to make such a poem, my favourite.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/22/2023 5:19:00 AM
Thank you so much for your kind words and perspective, Wendy:-)

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