Maelstrom

This is the shop of shattered illusions,
Ante room to a peculiar type of hell;
Enter here full of hopes
To have them all dispelled.
It is the stuff of nightmares,
Your wildest darkest dreams,
The door bell greets you
With a cacophony of screams.
The track in the background
Is of a clanking rattling chain 
Accompanied by the moans 
Of a being in utter pain.
As soon as you enter 
The desire is to escape
From the Stygian gloom
Of this place of mental rape.
Where every second is
A week, every minute a year
And a writhing shaken brain
Silently yells get out of here. 
Outside of the doorway,
Ashen faced shaking white
They all turn for a surreptitious  
Last confirmation sight;
But the shop of shattered illusions 
Doesn't stay anywhere for long
And before they can see it
It's disappeared, disintegrated, gone.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Volumes Avatar
October 2, 2022 at 4:56 PM
An intriguing poem Terry. Are you describing a nightmare ? I enjoyed it, waiting for an answer, that didn't come.
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October 2, 2022 at 11:47 PM
I lost my dear wife of 42 years, 4 months, and 14 days to Cancer. I had been her carer for 18 months and lost 6 months of my life when she went. It was only the dedication of 7 Veterans I’d served with that pulled me through. Maelstrom was the start of coming back to life. Thank you for your kind comment. That was nearly 11 years ago, we Veterans are one less, but still supporting each other. Terry
Kyser Avatar
September 24, 2022 at 7:21 AM
Listening to rage poets again? Lots of good imagery there, Terry!
Ireland Avatar
September 24, 2022 at 9:44 AM
Just over 10 years ago one of ,my friends started a spoken word night at a local bar. It regularly had audiences of 70-80, gave spots to all abilities and styles. It is now on ltd last legs as about 2 years ago a gang of anger poets started coming. They treated all others with contempt and all the good wishes went. As one chap said, if he wasn’t suicidal when he came he was when he left. Maelstrom is positively upbeat by their standard.. Funny old world. Thanks for commenting Jeff.
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