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Maddie An Old Fashioned Woman

Uncle Wilbur said Maddie was old-fashioned. I was thinking 50’s or 60’s He meant a throwback to the seventies. I had not met anyone this calm since life before Woodstock. Maddie had glazed eyes, there was a smell of patchouli. She was blowing slow easy smoke rings. Her blonde hair was fashioned into messy dreadlocks Her casual cotton sundress reminded me of flour feed sacks. I looked at Uncle Wilbur in a new light. I had never before thought of him as a risk taker. This one would run away with his heart.

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Date: 1/8/2023 7:36:00 AM
I love this tale you've spun Caren, Very creative! :) laf
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/8/2023 8:12:00 PM
Thank you Linda. I appreciate it

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