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Madcap Happiness

happiness, puppy-sweet, lapping at toes. the strumming of sea nymph shells. the laughter of intoxicated friends, slightly tipsy, imbibing in whites and reds, sharing spousal threads and temporarily forgetting the kids, though their eyes drip with tenderness, like honey, as they release the swash of grandchildren pics, ebbing and flowing in the sea of collaborative commotion.
like drunken sailors with dancing tattoos of kids — housework abandoned
happiness bubbling over, no stinging jellyfish, only a high as you ride the whimsical spout of a humdinger of a whale. the splash of happiness as your adventurous boat glides over funny water, the rapids contained amidst the cool glacial vistas.
hallucinating goliath-size polar bears waving with a coke
friend, i’ll join you in your happiness, sipping our sumptuous chalices, dressed in medieval wimples and petticoats. we shall chat alongside the faerie garden - the wisps of pink and blue wings, a sparkling chatter of singsong at the lovely affair.
wee chalices cheer our frolicking happiness leaving us breathless
6/5/19 Hey, Write a Happy Haibun Poetry Contest Sponsor - Caren Krutsinger

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Date: 8/6/2019 2:23:00 AM
Congratulations, Kim on your top win with a beautiful multi-Haibun.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/6/2019 4:23:00 AM
Thank you, Subimal!
Date: 8/2/2019 8:08:00 PM
The beautiful whimsy and artistry of your haibun left me breathless, Kim. Your exquisite poem lives up to its title as I was magically caught up in the madcap happiness of it all. A fav! Congratulations on your excellent win. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/2/2019 9:05:00 PM
Thank you, dear Susan!
Date: 8/2/2019 6:11:00 AM
This is great Kim. Love the intoxicated laughter part (lol). So well done! Congratulations on your top win. Hugs Charlie
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/2/2019 8:02:00 AM
Thank you, Charles!
Date: 8/2/2019 5:30:00 AM
If I were Caren, I'd gold it too. If I ever get over my laziness and start translating from English into Russian again, your texts will be the first in the list. They are so, hm, spacy) Congrats, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/2/2019 8:02:00 AM
Thank you, Kurt! :)
Date: 8/1/2019 4:52:00 PM
Though I'm slightly tipsy as a speak Kim, I can still tell this is wonderful. Magical and mystical. I wanna join you all. Congratulations on you placement.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/1/2019 5:15:00 PM
Heart to heart, dear Jean! Hugs...Kim
Date: 6/7/2019 12:43:00 PM
Fantastic Panagiota
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/7/2019 1:39:00 PM
Thank you, Panagiota!
Date: 6/5/2019 4:28:00 PM
Be just this one, Caren should close the contest and award 1st, 2nd, 3rd Place per stanza Kim--Best Wishes indeed, Aloha William
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/7/2019 1:39:00 PM
Thank you, sweet William! :)
Date: 6/5/2019 11:14:00 AM
Hi Kim - Caren will love this - didn't see the comments below, but guess we all agree in unison with this one - good luck best wishes, Jennifer.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/5/2019 3:22:00 PM
Thank you, Jennifer!
Date: 6/5/2019 10:58:00 AM
Wow this us a haibun and a half, Jan's right Caren will swoop on this one. Good luck, but I dont think you'll need it. Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/5/2019 3:22:00 PM
Thanks, Tom! :)
Date: 6/5/2019 10:57:00 AM
I want intoxicated to the point that I live in the 3rd paragraph! I delighted in your imagery and so did my sober child as brought out to mum and hum throughout your write. Whatever I just said, I mean! Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/5/2019 3:21:00 PM
You’re invited too, my poetry friend! :)
Date: 6/5/2019 9:54:00 AM
I know Caren will just love this the imagery is right up her street. i love the haiku Kim they are charming:-) hugs Jan xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/5/2019 9:56:00 AM
Thanks so much and for the encouragement and all! Funny how even criticism can spur me on. Yes, sometimes I must close my tablet, walk away but the I come back stronger. Love and hugs...Kim

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