Madame Butterfly

Her gentle nature, soft like rain
held fragile beauty, like her name
In this fragrant blossom, he found bliss 
Eluded her with a tender kiss
And gentle strokes would touch her cheek
A promised love he wouldn't keep
With fickled breath, he took her heart
He toyed with her, he played a part,
He stole her love, then sailed away
And told her he'd be back some day
Her face looked out from ocean shore
With undying hope, a child she bore
Sun and moon would hear her song, faint sweet echo of a song
her cradled child, the days grew long
They waited in the ocean's breeze
With futile hopes that wouldn't cease
The stars were shining, love was crying
With pining ache, her heart was dying
Convinced his love had been so pure
She learned a truth,... could not endure
Another shore he had a wife
In disgrace, she took her life!

BUTTERFLY!! ...             Butterfly!!                  ... butterfly..................
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008


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Date: 12/3/2008 3:14:00 AM
Wonderful ingenious Witing, Carrie. I love Madame butterfly. Her music will forever play in my heart.
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Date: 11/20/2008 8:15:00 AM
Yes, what can I say except poor butterfly - so unfair and to lose her lover and child - never tire of this beautiful opera.. Thank you for your comments on my poem..
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Date: 11/19/2008 12:06:00 PM
yes a touching piece of poetry.
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Date: 11/18/2008 12:43:00 PM
Poor Butterfly. Fritz Kreisler made a recording of this 1920s song. I loved it. Puccini would have loved it. I love your synopsis. Love, daver
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Date: 11/18/2008 8:06:00 AM
One of the great stories, but like "Titanic", it always has the same ending. Still. it is ageless. God Bless. Vince
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Date: 11/18/2008 5:38:00 AM
Gosh Carrie, this is horribly sad! Wow, so well written leaving the reader quite emotional at the end. Well done! Love, Shar
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Date: 11/18/2008 3:46:00 AM
Poor butterfly indeed! A very gentle, and pretty write dear lady! It flowed very well. :) Love Kristin
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Date: 11/18/2008 2:05:00 AM
Beautiful words Carrie.One for my favourites listing I think.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments on my postings/blogs
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Date: 11/17/2008 7:14:00 PM
Oh, Madam B...how I love that sad old opera..the music is some of the best ever written. thanks for this moving replay. BG
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